A Special Dream (poem)

A special dream that had to go

Another play another show

And as the winds begin to blow

Were yesterdays completely so

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A time to laugh for just a while

Another tear another smile

A passing chance we might beguile

This moment meant to test our style

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A time to let our feelings go

Another kiss another smile

Such fantasies we could beguile

And through it all I love you so

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But twilight greets each passing while

Another stage another show

A distant call begins to blow

A call it took all this to style

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Although it’s true it isn’t so

Another tear another blow

Eternity and time will show

A special dream that had to go

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Angelme566 4 years ago

Yes there is always hope , but really letting go is so painful that i myself can hardly do it..

Such beautiful sad poem..Voted up and shared !


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Lot Rillera 4 years ago from Philippines

beautiful poem. sadness and letting go. if letting go can ease the pain so we must do !


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

Awesome poem, perfect selection of words,

brilliantly presented,

cheers


Hubert Williams 4 years ago

Martin you never cease to amaze me. Very well done.


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

You express the forlorn and bitter sweet feeling of parting so well. Nicely done. :) Voted up and more.


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Lady_E 4 years ago from London, UK

Another beautiful poem. Cheers.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Yes sad, but so beautifully done, it's hard to let go of that special dream, but sometimes let go we must. Voted up and awesome.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This is all so true.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Very sad, intensly beautiful. Another fine creation.


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

A great poet who can even write about sorrow beautifully.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Beautifully written and the video was perfect. The song set the tone, even though I don't understand French. Music is the universal language. Beautiful song and a beautiful poem. Voted up.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. So painful when you finally have to let go of that one dream. Liked the video.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Beautifully said, but so sad - voting up/awesome


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

a really nice poem and so well written. I feel melancholy, so your perfect words did the trick!


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

sigh...life - in a beautiful nutshell, Martin!


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

A beautifully woven dream indeed... makes me feel sad that it had to go

Nice write

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