A True Friend Unless (limerick)

My friends I would never betray

No matter the cash one might pay

True friendships would whirl

Through window I’d hurl

Whenever cute girl winked my way

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lovedoctor926 3 years ago

the girl's expression on her face is funny. good limerick. voted up!

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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Still brings a smile to my face everytime. Jamie

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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Way to go - some things just bring out the worst...he looks determined.

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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Funny one.

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Friends over cute girl? Making the right choice might just get you both!

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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

That's some serious temptation. I guess you can always make new friends, right? LOL

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Guys are easy!! LOL

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Great words of freindship

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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Thanks my friend for another fun read !

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Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

Lol! Should a man put his girl above his buddies? A really good one, resounding through the corridors of truth with always a hint of tongue-in-cheek, Mhatter99.Sharing;

Have yourself a cracking day;


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

I guess that it's all for one and one for all.

So wait 'til they leave and give her a call.

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Thank you again for a good laugh.

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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

Be careful if you're friends to more than one cute girl. How many times can you hurl?

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

hehehe Yes, I can see that happening for sure!

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ImKarn23 3 years ago

LOL...women are trouble makers eh??

yep, and proud of it! haha

sharing M

Hope you're wellxx

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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Interesting wordplay.

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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Interesting wordplay.

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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

A laugh out loud.

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Spot on once again Martin and I love your work in whichever genre you choose.

Enjoy your day my dear friend.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I know that has happened more than once.

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