Absence Of You (poem)

I woke from a dream the absence of you

An endless review of nothing at all

No hope of morning to cast away doubt

No comforting light to show me a way

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Timeless confusion toyed with my fog

Faceless familiars turned a blind eye

Soundless endeavor crying of heart

Endless and never ways to get out

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I dared not recall what dropped me here

Shouting in silence alone in a mob

Absent my reason purpose was lost

Far beyond fear was this nothing at all

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Then in from some window I heard a voice ring

Calling me back from a mistake I made

Forgiving the sound of How have you been

I just had a dream the absence of you

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thelyricwriter 3 years ago from West Virginia

Very beautiful, touching poem! Love the title, perfect for the message. Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and shared on FB.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very heartrending and intense. Excellent write!

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

Very poignant and sad, the absence of love. The image is powerful. You are a gifted one when it comes to capturing the expression of loss. Bless you. Voted up and beautiful.


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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Beautiful and sad! Thanks for sharing!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I hope the dream was just a dream and not a nocturnal expression of loss.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

I'd call that a Bad Dream!

But, the poem is a work from the heart.


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sweethearts2 3 years ago from Northwest Indiana

Sadly, I live this daily. Memories are the voice that awaken me from the nightmare. Beautifully expressed. Voted up


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lupine 3 years ago from Southern California (USA)

Dreams can be powerful...sometimes our minds are not at rest, even while we sleep. I wish you pleasant dreams from now on...


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

I love this, so beautiful..To dream about one who is gone is sad. You captured it perfectly..


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Indian Chef 3 years ago from New Delhi India

beautiful poem, thanks for sharing


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A lovely poem with man expressions


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up. Wonderful poem. Dreamily expressed.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Lovely poem, so beautifully expressed.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Sounds a bit haunting, but beautiful all the same.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Dreams can fuse with reality and cause so mud doubt. You captured the feeing so well.


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nighthag 3 years ago from Australia

Potent haunting and beautiful

A true jewel

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