Achoo(haiku to what Spring brings)

Achoo and yea!.
Achoo and yea!.


Whisk and whish, goes wind,

As I huff and puff, in kind.

Flowers, all pollen, to send.


Brightly shines sun's light,

sweetly, sing the birds, at dawn,

Rising hopes, so bright.


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Ahhh (choo) this is so lovely!


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend, whonu.


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

this is great


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Along with the beauty comes the hayfever, huh? I'll bet Claritin sales skyrocket during the Spring!


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Brilliant haiku's, well done! Jamie


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

This is so sweet and adorable. Really good work, keep it up!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Beautiful haiku, the Spring sunshine was glorious today, unfortunately; Jack frost is on his way, well...that's life! :)


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks bravewarrior, Frank, Jamie, OudsiaP1, and James for your kind words. Stay well. whonu


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

Yes, lovely! Brings a few A-choos, but is the most wondrous season of the year!


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks for stopping in my friend, whonu


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Allergies yes, but the birds and flowers still prevail. A great and truthful piece.


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend, whonu.


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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

Great work, wonderful haiku. Voted up.


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend and well received. whonu


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RTalloni 3 years ago from the short journey

He, he, he--Achoo Haiku! :) We enjoyed the birds bright songs today--thanks for sharing your poem!


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States Author

Thanks my friend, and well received. whonu

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