Clouds of Who We Are

Voluminous clouds of who we are

unique in our ubiquity

we float patterned across the sky.

Enveloped and evolving

we embrace the transient impact

and yield to the sculpting breeze.

And in a moment we are transformed.

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Comments 6 comments

Janhorner 4 years ago

How beautiful. It made me feel peaceful,

Loved the last line 'Excite your soul.'

Thank you for sharing.

Jan


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carmaluda 4 years ago from New Zealand Author

Thank you for your positive feed-back, and encouragement :)

Caro


Emer420 4 years ago

Very beautiful. :)


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carmaluda 4 years ago from New Zealand Author

Thank you Emer! :)


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

simply beautiful.. voted up...

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carmaluda 4 years ago from New Zealand Author

Thank you Debbie, very much. :o)

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