Addicted- the Tender Gender

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Addicted- the Tender Gender

By Tony DeLorger © 2011


The tender gender in quiet surrender,

ever enticing, eyes that mend a

broken heart, a painful start,

thwarted egos a gentle art.


A mind to speak a body to treat,

a love to rise within our eyes,

a soul to swoon, and doubts to ruin,

a sensual touch and words to croon.


Delicate lines so soft, sublime,

erotic sway my mind in rhyme,

while hearts afloat in tiny boats,

on seas of raging passion cope.


In mind and body I am a pawn,

your loving ways in me are born,

captured bare and open I,

my heart to give on you rely.


Your nurture sweet, you smile complete,

and I the puppet of indiscreet,

all open and naked for you to find,

your doll to play and ease my mind.


For you of tender gender deem,

me lost within my widest dream,

beside you I pray to spend my life,

addicted to you, my affliction rife.

I am yours.


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Thanks for a great comment and mutual feelings about our loved ones. Thanks for reading Ghaelach.


Ghaelach 5 years ago

Hello Tony.

Wonderfull thoughts and feelings that we the humble male have of our noble females.

I find that our opposit numbers are a wonderfull creature that we can't live without (at least i can't).

We the powerfull male need our delicate beautiful female LOVE.

Seriously a lovely poem about our feelings for our better halves. A beautiful awesome poem with a big UP.

Take care down under and have a nice day.

LOL Ghaelach


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia Author

Thanks Maribel, glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.


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MaribelsWords 5 years ago from NYC

I love this! Rhythmic and sensual.

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