Adonis Mine

How is it, you want me

One such as you

As if in a dream you rise

Adonis from the mist

Appearing from latent fantasies

Secret wishes from my youth

Before there were compromises

Not forgotten, just waiting

Biding your time

You come to me now

Deeming me ready

Afraid to blink or breathe

Stunned and dreamy

How can I

Weak with hunger

Whatever your desires

Do anything but comply


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rdfrank67 7 years ago from Seattle

I think this is my favorite so far....thanks for using my pictures in your hubs :)


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dohn121 7 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

This one's really hot...Like lava oozing out of a volcano in the middle of summer at high-noon! (Maybe I still got this)


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shamelabboush 7 years ago

A poem on fire again by RB! Fantastic specially the closure line...


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

No, thank you rdfrank! You and your self portraits are a lovely inspiration.

Dohn I'm so glad you like my poetry, although I think I've written "hotter" than this.

Nice to see you Shamel. I'm glad you appreciated the comply line. :)


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Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

Lovely steamy poem. Big smiles from the peanut gallery :)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Happy to make you smile Jess.


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

This is so HAWT! wow. :)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh gosh Invictus, I'm so glad you like it.


Am I dead, yet? 7 years ago

one 'sweet' lookin' and fiercely written poem follows another...Randy, again, fierce!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks AIDY. Let me know if you find any more videos that are perfect match for my poems :)


Am I dead, yet? 7 years ago

Will do =D


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wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

Very nicely done. I like it very much.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I'm glad you like my stuff Wesley.


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MFB III 6 years ago from United States

That's one washboard a girl is not going to scrub any clothes on, a six pack to share on a nightly basis, I'll bet you feel as if there's a smile tattooed on your face whenever he takes off his shirt.LOL!~~~MFB III


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Have you been spying on me MFB?


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Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

Hi, I wrote a poem years ago with a similar title, God know where i put it! but my point is you may be looking at the picture but the man in your head is the one you are seeing. lucky thing! ( I think this because this is what happened to me, could'nt get him out of there if I tried!) nice one. Nell


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Whether he is the spitting image of my school girl fantasies or purely a trick my minds is playing on me... color me happy. Thanks for stopping by Nell.

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