After the Rain

after the rain

like magic

the sky turns

many different hues

of rose across the sky

the air

full of electricity

the energy is crisp

seeping into your pores

feeding you from within

so romantic

the sun setting

in a perfect ellipse

through the silence

you hear the many crickets

while a thousand dreams

fill the air

hearing the whispered hopes

of each one melting through you

the little glowing lights surround you

like a perfect orchestrated dance

In this summer's dream

left to bask in the

beauty of all

the romance

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17 comments

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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

wow, i like it...:)


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btrbell 2 years ago from Mesa, AZ

So lovely! You've captured the essence of "after the rain"

"while a thousand dreams

fill the air

hearing the whispered hopes

of each one melting through you"

Up++ Thank you!


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Nyamache 2 years ago from Kenya

This is beautiful. I like the words you have used.


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DealForALiving 2 years ago from Earth

This poem is so true and so wonderfully written. I've enjoyed reading it very much.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

I love the calmness after a rain, reading this gave me the same feeling. Beautiful!


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LadyFiddler 2 years ago from Somewhere in the West

Very cute depiction of after the rain :)


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Frank, thank you I am glad that you liked it. :)

Hi Brtbell thank you for your kind words and for reading. :)

Hi Nyamache for reading and for your lovely words. :)

Hi DealForALiving thank you for your kind words and for reading. I am glad you liked it. :)

Hi Ruby thank you for your kind words. I am so glad you liked it. :)

Hi Lady thank you so much for reading and your comment. I am glad that you liked my little poem. :)


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

I love that smell of the earth after rain. Lovely poem.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Blossom for stopping by and reading. I love the smell too. :)


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SubRon7 2 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Such a beautiful poem, Caroline, and it seems you enjoyed the scene just by yourself, and sometimes being alone is the best way to experience and enjoy something.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you so much Jim! Yes, it was a very private and intimate experience. :)


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wayne barrett 2 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Beautiful work Caroline.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Wayne. :)


sky9106 24 months ago

another beauty here Caroline , I chose times to read you work , especially after seeing the name you chose ...as you do best its again filled with your special words and I can pick from any of many ...I love this ....

left to bask in the

beauty of it all

Very nice ...speak soon..bless.


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carolinemd21 24 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Sky for your kind words. It is nice to see you. Yes, this was a special one written right after a walk after the rain. :)


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KristianKikaso 20 months ago from Split

Hi Caroline;) your poem is so wonderful! I think I'll never stop admiring nature and its beauty!!


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carolinemd21 9 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you very much Kristian. :)

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