Afternoon on the highway (Tragic Poetry)


The highway seems crowded
Thick is the air
People drive only thinking
Their wants and cares

large truck moves over
Seeing no way through
cars turn to avoid it
Then havoc ensues

one car strikes another
Then into a truck
that spins uncontrolled
under a semi it tucks

the big truck jackknifes
it's loud airbrakes wail
then one more compact
into this mess sailed

striking the first car;
then over the wall
To the tracks below
this one last car falls

when thought its owners
the horror over would be
now comes an express train
the last thing they'll see

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must65gt 6 years ago Author

This poem was a contest entry inwhich the topic was to write a poem of horror. lol I didnt do well...


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Hello, hello, 6 years ago from London, UK

You should have done well. I think it is great. Thank you for sharing.


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must65gt 6 years ago Author

Thanks so much, Hello, it wasn't really about the poem, it was about how much I could spend to have it viewed and voted on. lol...no money, no votes...glad to be here and focusing back on writing.


Gift 6 years ago

I love your works!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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must65gt 6 years ago Author

thanks Gift, and thanks for reading

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