Alas The Door

I travel onto a place of make believe

My mind speaks the language of reliance

Onto the lands where I can achieve

Living along the limits of compliance

 

From a place where nothing was clear

The air polluted with fog and smoke

Photographs taken, visible images smear

Air pipes closed, tightly held to choke

 

A blind fold untied, released with care

Released by an angel’s graceful hand  

That was sent from the heavens air

Hanging onto God’s heavenly strand

 

A sigh of relief with no burdened weight

All was taken from the center of the core

The right path given to reach the golden gate

Knocked once with no hesitation, Alas his door

 

bellawritter23(copyright)2011

 

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Pamela99 5 years ago from United States

Maybe make believe but it sounds like the path to freedom. Beautiful poetry.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Pam, Thank you freedom alas! :)

smiles :)

bella


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

A path so soon taken for some.;)


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

It's a wonder to see our Ms. Bella so free...

I like the part:

"A sigh of relief with no burdened weight

All was taken from the center of the core

The right path given to reach the golden gate..."

Your angel is my angel..


Johnny Love 5 years ago

I am going with BB on this one. So much beauty in your heart. I love how you show it painting words for all to cherish. You are amazing Bella.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Only one word here Bella; beautiful !!

Take care

Eiddwen.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Acer, Yes if I go I am ready and willing nothing to fear :) Thanks for reading as always you are truly a kind soul!

bella


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

bb, Thanks my friend we definately have to meet soon I keep thinking end of april :) early may!! Thanks for reading and the comments as always!!!

bella


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Johnny, lol why thank you sweet man! I try to tend to write from my gut so I guess this is where it all flows from....


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Eid, Thank you!! for taking the time to read and comment!!

bella


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

Just say when and where...

I'll have your book by then and you can sign it a few thousand times for me, your all-time biggest fan!!! =)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

Nice, you changed up the rhyming scheme. thats good. just one question for you...in the first line you said "I travel onto a place of make believe" and throughout the poem you end up face to face with an angel at heavens doors...does this mean you dont believe in such a place? just wondering.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

bb, I will sure let you know!!

Nikki, A place of make believe is the land we walk on it is all make believe it is all a show our real place is heaven and heavens grounds. I live in a facade that is temporary holding my existance until the time comes for me to go home. Once i take my very last breath I will be free of all the fake and voids. We are not of this world and I believe that. I may accomplish things in life that may be sureal to me its all a test of faith! I hope this answers the question lol. Sorry went a lil religous but its just my thoughts and opinion thanks sunshine as always. :)


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Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

Soulful, sad but true - beautifully done :-)


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan

Bella, Bella, Bella. You never cease to amaze me.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Bumpsys, Thank you!!

Daunte, lol I appreciate your comment and feedback!!

smiles :)

bella


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

good answer bella! thanx i misunderstood what you meant i guess. hehe.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

lol thanks nikki and hey it happens :)

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