All I am Is you

I want to hold your hand forever.
I want to hold your hand forever.

I watch you look me in the eyes.

It is moments like this that take me to another world.

In this world there is no pain.

All I can feel is my heart pounding.

I hear all of your words of comfort.

I have to take a deep breath and wonder if I am really alive.

You have me backed in a corner and I can't escape.

I wouldn't ever want to leave a place like this.

When I am with you I am in heaven.

I watch our hands interlock and wonder how they fit so perfectly together.

I know we were made for each other.

The way my heart feels when I am around you I know that all I am is you.

Our minds seem to wonder to the same paradise.

In thoughts we run through the fields of love.

On cloud nine we can reach any height we want.

Hand in hand we watch the world pass by.

The happiness rushes through my body.

No one has ever made me feel like this in my whole life.

I'm trapped in a paradise, one like I never thought I could find.

You are all I know.

You are all I feel.

Lost in your eyes.

I know all I am Is you.


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loua 6 years ago from Elsewhere, visiting Earth ~ the segregated community planet

Now that is an inspired piece of poetry, it lifts the mind from the body and lets the soul soar float aloft in the fragrant air of heaven's bliss... Bravo my dear...


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Chad A Taylor 6 years ago from Somewhere in Seattle...

Stunning


stephane86 6 years ago

Your poetry is stunning. I still have a hard time understanding the image: All I am is you. It's beautiful because it could be anyone, a friend, boyfriend, relative. Thanks for this piece of poetry.


stephane86 6 years ago

Two days later, I am still thinking about your piece. That says something.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

When two hearts meet - that is so special. When "...Our minds seem to wonder to the same paradise..." that tells me everything I need to know, Chrissie. You are a great poet and your words are so powerful and fantastic. This is one of the best I have read from you here in quite a while, if I can say that. Your poetry is great because it feels so real. We feel the harmony between two people here in this writing. Just beautiful. I am glad you are here in Hub Pages for me to be able to read great poetry like yours. :)


TattoGuy 6 years ago

Loves that Flightless Bird song and that poem was beautiful, I also have a treat for you this weekend Chrissie as I am writing a cracking Avril Lavigne Hub, I knows you will like it, keep those poems coming moi friend x


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

beautiful rhythm I say - loved it!

cheers

kimberly


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

The last line really says it all. Oh boy, Chrissie, you have it bad! Great, isn't it? Hehehe! It is great to find the special person and to be able to articulate as well and as fluidly as you do. The simpler you say it, the truer it feels. Just so impressed by this.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

Chrissie, this is amazing writing. I dont know if you know what you want to do, but your certainly a writer. Im so happy Ray shared you on facebook, cause now i get to know your writing.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

Chrissie, this is amazing writing. I dont know if you know what you want to do, but your certainly a writer. Im so happy Ray shared you on facebook, cause now i get to know your writing.

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