Alone?

you stand

away from the herd

and think

does the herd stand away

from you?


alone

in the fields of uncertainty

you shy away

being unreal

in your own reality


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jjrubio 7 years ago

Beautiful!


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Russ Baleson 7 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom Author

Thank you, much appreciated xx


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tonymac04 7 years ago from South Africa

Ah Russ - you stand out from the herd, that's for sure!

Thanks for sharing

Love and peace

Tony


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maven101 7 years ago from Northern Arizona

Hi Russ... Nicely written...concise and heartfelt.

Reminds me of Kant's empirical realism...there's a duality here...Larry


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Proud Mom 7 years ago from USA

The first stanza represents so many things to me!! I LOVE this poem!

Great job, Russ!


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Russ Baleson 7 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom Author

Thanks guys, it's comments like these from people like you that inspire me to keep on writing. Thanks for your support.

Russ


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Lgali 7 years ago

good writing


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Jewels 7 years ago from Australia

That resonated. Very real.


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Russ Baleson 7 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom Author

Thank you!

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