With dexterity
inspired by

a spark
in the

coal black

of my
questioning orbs
I journey

on an

Time away

from life
to simply enjoy
climbing the hills,
and loops,

swooping over
the tight

valleys and
circumventing the
many horseshoe

curves that

circle an
inky landscape
which trails across
snowy whites 

mixed into 

wooded pulp.

Eberhard trees

lie at angles

casting graphite

as I sail


by thoughts

and free.

Delighting in

the mind scapes
around me,

I savor 
my trip through
the poetrees 

lining a
babbling river

of words 
and flowing down

mounting stanzas
that boldly mark
horizons yet

to be reached.





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sasanqua 6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

I really enjoyed this. My one piece of feedback is in regards to the last stanza. I feel you have overused the word "that." It is too repetitive for my liking. Otherwise, great work!

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MFB III 6 years ago from United States Author

Thanks for the critique. I failed to notice that my that's were something that might dirupt the flow that I I should edit this comment next. I always appreciate a heads up from my peers of poetry. thanks agian~~MFB III

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MFB III 6 years ago from United States Author

disrupt that blood seems to be typo!!

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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Dude- you always have "the way". Nice Sir!

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poetlorraine 6 years ago

lovely once again...... i am a huge fan, of your work

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