Already, a Poem


Already, I lay down for you.

and listen to your playlist;

watch your shows.

never get a word in


The whirlwind showed up.

mildly illegal, I think...

Chaos, devil driven,

sex and smoking and...

whatever he can get

away with....

I'm already lost...

a puff of smoke is

the way my soul was,

drifting away on the

lazy air...

all the careful sober thoughts

look like children's toys..

God is on call waiting,

until I find enough fear

to stop this train;

I tried, people. I'm falling-

and all these goals

are buried under soft lies.

Pray for me, here and now!

In unison!

he's gone for a while...

while I try to

gather my mind,

gather my skirts

and flee...

Please, God!

Be with Me...

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epigramman 3 years ago

I can not afford any other way in this life, my darling Lily, I will always be with you.

Signed a fellow HubGod,



p.s. - and now I know who 'invented' writing , you did my dear.

Just finished watching the Leaf/Bruin hockey game and sending warm wishes to you from Colin and his cats at 10:04pm lake erie time

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lilyfly 3 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska Author

Right back at you, God Colin, watched some of the Derby, not enough, now listen, I need your continued good thoughts to shed my old boyfriend,(Chaos) It snowed today, May 4th!!!!!! Ahggggg! How I love you,,, dear soul... lily

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ytsenoh 3 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

Lily, with you. It snowed here in the midwest this week, it did, it did. I said more than ahggg. Saw two inches of it on the deck and said, "really?"

Nice weaving of language, again, as usual. Keep writing. Shed old, embrace you.

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moonfroth 3 years ago from Rural BC (Canada) & N of Puerto Vallarta (Mexico)

There's that easy, natural flow of language that (I think) simply comes our of your pores and always seems so right,

as you know, I don't go down the God road, but that certainly doesn't mean I'm insensitive to the emotion you're conveying so wel here

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lilyfly 3 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska Author

Thanks Ynetsoh, Moon, boy, oh boy. The morning after. It's a doozy. Waiting for my job call... love yaz, lily

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lilyfly 3 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska Author

Gosh, I make it sound like I'm smoking crack. Nope. Nope. Never! Just not used to sex, and I know I shouldn't be drinking. At all. lily

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