Am I doing something wrong?

I will be anything you want me to be. Just don't break my heart!
I will be anything you want me to be. Just don't break my heart!

I don't know what to think anymore.

I don't know what you feel anymore.

Are you even the guy I thought you were?

So many lies building up.

Do You even Believe I love you?

I love you more than anything in the world.

I don't care about what you have to offer I am not that type of girl.

You hurt me when you lie to make yourself to look better.

Did you enjoy flirting and getting your way with her picture?

My heart is torn apart right now.

I don't know what to do.

Sometime I feel like im forcing you to be with me.

I am beautiful I just wish you could see.

I will change anything you want me to.

For I am 100% completely in love with you.

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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Chrissie, I know how you feel and I have been there myself. You can't force him to love you in the way you want him to. Try to hold back. Tease him a little, pretend to have other interests, comment on other men - perhaps in magazines, on TV. I know you want him so badly but it is better to make him want you in his own way. Let him come to you and try not to pressurise him. If he doesn't and he continues to lie then you will have to be brave and walk away. It is so difficult, I know where you are coming from, but it is better to have the hurt now rather than much later on. I so hope that things work out for you. Take care Acaetnna.

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mylife=adventure 5 years ago from Wisconsin

I agree with Acaetnna. Sadly, there is a majority of men out there that are dicks. It's something you will have to just come to an understanding, but you need to see that there are plenty of people out there in the world. It's up to you to open your eyes and see what is truly there to be seen.

Stay happy and true- Mylife=Adventure.

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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

Thank both of you really good feed back for me :) I appreciate it

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mikielikie 5 years ago from Texas

I can never get too much emotion out of your writing. It's always just the right amount. Like you pour your broken heart out onto the page. The heart is such a great influence for a writer. Regaurdless if it pumps fast with love or slow with despair. That said... Kick this guy to the curve if he doesn't see how wonderful you truly are. Hope it all works out.

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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

I thank you so much for that comment! This is why I right just when the emotions hit the greatest point. I love to get them out if they are bad or share the good :)

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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

It is good to put it all out there, and share, chrissie. I love this poem, it's straight up and forthright. I personally would not change myself for the person, small things maybe if I did something wrong. But isn't that why the guy wants the change? It turns sometimes into us changing and acting like we are wrong when maybe it is not us who is wrong, but we fall for that trick perhaps. He should love you for being you.

A good lover will learn to accept our faults if we have any. If you accept his faults, should he have any, will he do likewise? Sorry, I don't mean to be a pain. But your mentioning of him flirting and some picture with another girl just annoyed me.

Cheeky Girl has a saying, don't reward bad behaviour, it just makes us look desperate. I have to agree. I hope he realises you are taking the love serious. I don't think you did anything wrong. Maybe a little shock treatment will focus his mind a bit. I was cheated on once or twice and the second time I let the person feel my damn temper and walked out in disgust. Everyone in Macdonalds that day heard it and the other person didn't try it on after that. Message duly delivered. Sad but necessary.

Aim high, and don't undervalue yourself, chrissie. You are worth it.

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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

I loved your comment and I completely agree no rewarding bad behavior you speak the truth in every line! I will keep your words with me and that is a promise. Thank you for your kind words really touched my heart Astra.

TattoGuy 5 years ago

"I will change anything you want me to."

Chrissie you are a lovely girl and you are the person you are which is why I love you to bits. Don't ever change who or what you are for anybody.

Great poem, take muchness hugs from moi x

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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thanks so much tattoGuy much hugs back I really appreciate the comment

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