Ubani's Rapture of Delight

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Prologue

A friend, Alexander Thandi Ubani/ ubanichijioke a friend of mine wrote a rather lovely poem which I was inspired to write a simple prose in response. He has inspired me as he probably has inspired so many. It is a simple little poem to respond to his wonderful poem http://ubanichijioke.hubpages.com/hub/THEHALCYONDAYSOFOURLIVES.

It is a playful poem and not meant to offend anyone in anyway.

Ubani's Rapture of Delight

Why does Ubani make my face glow?

What is it he spurs that only he knows.

When I read his words the excitement gives me a rush.

And I feel my face full with blush.

Damn Ubani you make me so hot.

When you write about reaching my perfect spot.

You must have quite a reach from your foreign land.

Your poetry touches me as if it were your hand.

Like the tempest you summon the turmoil of the storm.

A metaphor of love making’s crescendo; the climax is being born.

We will release our burdens together an exploding orgasm like a dying star.

In unison we unleash our anguish with a final thrust synchronized our hearts.

Your gift is your love, your words and the naughty thoughts you put in my mind.

As foreplay I’d give you three thrashes on your behind.

So in my dreams Ubani, chew my knickers off and rip away my bra.

And if I am too much we can always have a manage et toi.

Until then I will provide you with a guide.

To my secret spot hidden inside.

Touch it, thrust it, pound it until we both are completely satisfied.

And then both of us like the Eagles can happily die!

For life without love is such a bore.

Make love until you can no more.

When you go to your great rest.

Upon your grave the only word that will appear will be “BEST”.

Disclaimer

While this poem is a simple poetic response to Ubani's The Halycon Days of Our Lives. It is original and all rights are reserved for the author JT Walters.


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marriedwithdebt 4 years ago from Illinois

Ubani is a great hubber. He was one of the first people to welcome me to HP. I love his Lillies of A Midnight Dawn poem.

Thanks for giving me a "different" picture of him :)


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JT Walters 4 years ago from Florida Author

Thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, I love Ubani's work as well.

JT


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LABrashear 4 years ago from My Perfect Place, USA

I have not been introduced to Ubani, but your response makes me curious. Very cheeky and well done JT!


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JT Walters 4 years ago from Florida Author

Yes, it would be nice to meet Ubani. Poor guy he would be loved to death in N. America.

All My Best,

Jt


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ubanichijioke 4 years ago from Lagos

Wow Jt, your imaginary abilities, talent, gift have no equal. I love

'you must ve a reach from your foreign land

Your poetry touches me as if it were your hands

like the tempest you summon the turmoil of the storm'

wow awesome imaginative powers.

What about this

'touch it, thrust it, pound it until we both are completely satisfied'

wow! wow!! Wow!!! You re a classy poet of distinction.

I bow in appreciation my poetic and talented friend.


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Ubani is one of my favorite hub authors. Thanks for sharing your feelings.


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JT Walters 4 years ago from Florida Author

Hi Ubani,

Your wonderful words inspired me. My talent is only a reflection of your great talent. I hope I didn't make you laugh to hard with the line about thrashes and knickers. It was a simple poem nonetheless but one to compliment your great talent.

Love your work!!

JT


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JT Walters 4 years ago from Florida Author

Hi Vinaya,

Yes, Unbanin is quickly becoming one of my favorite poets as well.:)

JT


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Happyboomernurse 4 years ago from South Carolina

Beautiful tribute to Ubani and a passionate response to his stunning poem, "The Halcyon Days of Our Lives."

Voted up across the board except for funny.


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ubanichijioke 4 years ago from Lagos

Hahaha, @Jt, I didn't laugh but smiled at the invitation

'So in my dreams Ubani, chew my knickers off and rip away my bra'

OMG! What tempting invitation, such a persuading if not enchanting invite.

'as foreplay, i'd give you three thrashes on your behind' hahaha by the time you finish lashing my behind i would ve gotten to haven.

I am still at awe how you seduced my imaginative powers. You rock!


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GoodLady 4 years ago from Rome, Italy

Beautiful!

Sensual, sexual, female, and I'm so happy to read it and remember, feel the love.

It's a lovely piece of work JT Walters.

Thank you so much.


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JT Walters 4 years ago from Florida Author

Hi Happyboomernurse,

Thank you and Ubani inspired me so. I am glad you got a good laugh. My friend and I had a hearty laugh as well as it is so unlike me to write such things.

Thanks for the votes and I glad you enjoyed it. Nothing makes me happier then to please my reader as I enjoy their work so. Well with the exception of perhaps titilating my new friend Ubani:)

JT


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JT Walters 4 years ago from Florida Author

Ubani,

I toned this poem down as I was afraid to really write my most seductive entreatment but you seem to get the jist (no pun intended of course). I surrendered to magnificence upon first cursory read of your poem and in that surrenderment to your magnificence prose I was able to write a little simple poem back to you.

Like two flames, intertwined, burning into each other our love making is consumed in and exquisit existential ecstasy.

If we ever meet I will try to get flavored knickers so they are delicious and I know you reach heaven each time you write. I can read it in your enticing poems!! Save the rocking for if we ever meet my friend!! People are fighting to get into N. America for a reason dear friend:)

You are a delightful pleasure Ubani. So glad our writing has connected. Out of 498 hubs you are the only person I have written a naughty hub to or a rapturous delight depending on how you survey the my labor of love.

:)


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JT Walters 4 years ago from Florida Author

Hello Goodlady,

Ubani inspired me and then I let him be my guide. It was a great deal of fun to write and took me only a few minutes whereas most of my other work takes a great deal of research and a long time.

Thanks for reading and commenting. It was a big naughty but it is fun to be naughty once and a while especially with Ubani!!

Thanks for the wonderful compliments. I am certain I made a lot of people blush on this one but it was a great deal of fun!!

And no thank you, Goodlady.

And if you happen to know where I can locate some flavored knickers it would be most helpful in the event I ever actually meet Ubani!!

It will be just between us English lasses!!

:)

JT

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