An English Rose and Her Lover

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This Hub has been written to answer a challenge that a "virtual" friend and fellow writer from another site has asked me to write. It is intended to be reviewed in the genre of creative writing. It does contain some graphic sexual descriptions, and I do not wish to offend my readers. I have toned it down to come within the Hub Pages restrictions, and please remember it is purely fiction.

Several people, have in the past suggested that I take the sensual romantic genre as a serious contender for my future writing ability. I hope I leave enough to the imagination and senses, but I truly do not wish to offend.

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Part 1.

It happened in the twinkling of an eye, well almost, because that is what I remember now. Showing an appearance from the shadows, to a sun shining bright for hope, he came. He pushed strangely, eerily, almost arrogantly, his name forward into a resting place inside my mind. I thought it would be safe to recall such imagery at a later date. Now, I am not ungrateful, for his chivalry came with a beautiful smile, maybe a smirk, and laughter that filled his deep brown eyes.

“Is it not by some strange fate that a meeting of minds is drawn together,” I ask.

The question still lingers in my mind. “But, if that was to be true, then how am I to move forward from the inexplicable emotions that I feel whenever I recall his name?”

This stranger came as a bolt of lightning, yes such a metaphor for his deliberation into my life. The past serves no reminder of how I feel today, as I am a complete nondescript giver of friendship. Powerless, so I say, to stop my head being turned around, if this stranger has his way.

Walking hand in hand, he sees through my eyes, the resplendent colours of a new, .....virtual life. The story books are filled with a handsome Prince in a frog’s disguise that waits for a kiss from a beautiful Princess. He is neither a frog, nor a Prince, and I am not as delicate as to be remembered as a Princess, but his charm is none the less, in equal power over my demise.

We lay amongst the bluebells on a carpet full of blue hue; the intoxicating sweet smells from the petals, as strong as to draw all the senses to fulfilment.

My virtual lover turns his handsome face to take my face in his own. The kiss, at first so gentle, so soft, and yet, his breath with an urgency of his own. I trace the contours of his face that still smiles with a youthful smile, but in his eyes, are secrets so bold as not to be ignored. I am consumed with a passion so great, and as fearful as that of a teenage girl being deflowered for the very first time. His lips part, and slowly I allow my fingertip to trace the mound of his lips, still fearful. I have to bow my head and allow my lips to part, and sensually, my tongue enters the path of no return. I am thirsty for the waterfall of warm mixed juices to come from both of our mouths, and dare I rush, or will I stumble on hard welcomes if I am to push harder for more.

As the beautiful golden sun, warm and tender, encourages me to be brave, I trace the buttons on his shirt. One by one, I open them to reveal soft flesh that tempts me to kiss the tender spot that the button covered. His nipples aroused to the temptation that he is being offered, and who am I to deny them a long lingering embrace between my lips. Licking and gently sucking the warm hard flesh that is for my own pleasure. His body stirs to the demand of his own doing. He tries to turn me over, but I have not had my fill. My fingers find the zip on his trousers, and I playfully caress his talents beneath my hand. The moan from his lips entices me to pull down the zip, and yet I will not give him the satisfaction of my warm hand on his stem, until I am ready. My hand firmly placed on his chest now, I breathe life into his heart as I say,

“Be still my love, for I am warm and tender, but not yielding just yet.”

I continue to explore this body looking for gratification beneath my hands. But who is this man who has awoken the vixen within? The woman whose senses he plays with, and who he thinks is grateful for his attention. Yes it is true, but grateful I am not, for now my lust for life has been re-awakened with such fever as to be satisfied in my way. He will rule the day that the gauntlet was thrown down, but mine is the way of a woman pleasing her man, teasing, exciting and eventually yielding.

I smile to myself as he moans beneath my touch, every so often trying to take control. I gently caress the fine hair around his navel, and yet my lips haven’t reached their goal. I nip gently at the top of his mound to show my appreciation of what is to unfold. Now wanting more, I take each beautiful ball of soft generous flesh into my mouth and suck. Suck until again I have the control, not by strength, but from imagination of the petals to fall. I take hold of the stem that sits proud before me, and I firmly push my flattened tongue to run the length of the stem but never reaching the flower. My hand, warm and enticing, and all the time moving in gentle persuasion for his anticipated bliss. I remove my blouse to reveal my ample breasts, now firm and with erect nipples that I slowly allow to trace your face.

“No, you cannot eat or taste the excitement yet.”

I position myself higher to allow my nipples to slowly transcend his chest; you can feel the urgency from my breathing and from the erect nipples searching for more. Finally I take your stem into my eager warm and moist mouth, licking the tip with such anticipation as a child with an ice cream cone. First my tongue flips your most sensitive area and you moan again. Then I gently ease your stem deep into my mouth, all the time easing my lips apart to welcome you. Slowly we dance, up and down as my hand twists the base of your stem, caressing and squeezing your full balls waiting to erupt. Then harder, but my mouth is willing to hold you back, but still the tongue flips and the intensity of the hold grips tighter. I will not let you satisfy yourself, as I want to keep you in suspended torture, so sensitive and in such pain as to burst. But not yet, this is only a sample. An appetiser for the imagination, as the screen play is only just about to begin. The title:

“The English Rose and Her Lover.”

Act 1 Scene 1

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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Augustine, you are a master of sensual as we all know. So the gauntlet is laid down for you to reply for the male point of view? Are you up to the challenge. You have two lovely ladies waiting to hear from you. x


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A.A. Zavala 4 years ago from Texas

Love is in the air, and on the pages of the hubs as well. Very tasteful and well done. Hope the moderators leave this series alone, we'll see...


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

I can see Martie now...The warm breeze blowing her lace curtain across her face as she conjures up a story that will excite and have us begging for more...Oh the anticipation!! Oh and if A.A. Zavala doesn't take up the challenge, i'll be disappointed..Hee


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Well my fellow Musketeer, what have you in store for us? MMM I wonder. Bring it on girlfriend. You know several men capable of answering us, what about a little beautifully done challenge from them. lol x


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Ruby, thank you as always for your loving and kind support. Wouldn't you just know it, our lovely Martie just can't resist a challenge lol. I am trembling now as I face her write off. We all know that Martie has hidden depths and an awesome talent. x


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Oh my goodness..Martie..Look out..It's 'gonna be HOT and MEAN to boot..HaHa..What fun this is.....


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Rusticliving 4 years ago from California

I can't believe I just read that knowing my ice trays were empty!

I want MORE!

*ahem* composing myself... In a proper ladys voice.."Very nicely done thebluestar".

(running to the freezer to make more ice)

~Lisa Rustic Living


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Mmm, here I came almost too late...

I love challenges like this.

Mmm, just dare me to jump a wild horse, and you'll see me ride a wild horse....

Forgive me, Mom! I know you've taught me not to... but I can't help myself... here I go :))


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

OMG, This is so much better than a dream...I do believe i need a little extra O2 and perhaps turn the air cond. on..Whooohooo, come on Baby light my fire......Do you want my opinion? This is GOOD....I could go on but i need to get a glass of H20..


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

mljdgulley, thank you for stopping by and leaving me a comment. No, this is not a book that I am writing,it is an exercise that a fellow writer challenged me to try to broaden my experience of writing sensual fiction. Many of my dear hub buddies, have in the past hinted that I may have a certain amount of talent in this genre. I was just wanting their opinion.


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mljdgulley354 4 years ago

Did you say you are writing a book. This is great. Probably be a best seller.


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Hi Eddy, thank you for stopping by and giving me an encouraging review. The funny thing is, that when this genre was first mentioned to me I hated the thought of it lol I wouldn't do it often I think, as I enjoy writing fact based fiction adventure like Grandpa Miller". xx


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Well Net, what a very steamy hub and has to be given the up up and away.-lol-

You do so obviously have the talent for this genre so I hope you will further entertain us on here.

Take care my friend and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Joyce, thank you so much for your generous nature. It is much appreciated. x


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Colin, Ken and yourself have always been a hunnie, lol hunnie x


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Rosemay, I am so happy that you decided to leave a comment. I know that checking my account, there are many visitors to this page that haven't left a comment. Thank you hunnie, it means a lot to me to have your support of my "creative writing" musings. x


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Absolutely no offence, I was talking about a book I wrote in 2009


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epigramman 4 years ago

..whatever you do Annette - never stop calling Ken and me - hunnie - lol lol

lake erie time 8:55pm


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Toned down??? Looking for advice??? Oh net you have everyone rushing for the shower. Tongues lolling for a taste.

Most definitely steamy and hot and... gee the temperature is raising in here.

Very tastefully written and this genre does suit you

I can see what is going to happen on hubpages over the next few days... weeks taking up that challenge.


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Ken hunnie, I appreciate your support and I am in total agreement, classification would stop the problem of offending other writers/readers, and also encourage the talent of the like of our dear Martie and Cardissa. Not that I am a a trouble maker, but it would make sense and everyone could be kept happy. Now, I am not proposing that every writer should write as I have just done, and I would never encourage true filth and porn that would devalue our site, but unfortunately sex sells. As writers are we always going to ignore that fact?


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saddlerider1 4 years ago

Correct Annette, as in another site, named Wattpad. They have an adult classification section, also all of your content you place there must be rated and they place the classifications in their tool bar in order for the writer to choose the rating they are writing under. Me thinks Hubs need to take a look at that option as well.


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Cardissa, you have constantly progressed in the world of writing. You angel, are a very accomplished writer and I salute you for your ability to write in every genre. If we do not experiment with our writing and the tools we are given, namely our imagination, how will we ever succeed. Hub Pages is a site for writers, is it not? I think that should be extended to all genres, and if necessary, we should have an option to read or not to read. Chin up babes. xx


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Joyce, hunnie I am so sorry if this hub has provoked bad memoires of the past. Please forgive me and if you would like, I shall remove it. Just ask.

Net xx


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Ken, the invitation is firmly open to anyone who wants to join us. I have a sneaky feeling that our gorgeous Martie, will not let me get the upper hand lol. So everyone watch out, Martie may be coming our way. x


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Cardisa 4 years ago from Jamaica

Annette you are too kind! Don't you remember that person who called my work porn? lol and they were half right. There is a wonderful handsome hubber who gave me some pointers on writing sensual, soft yet powerful stuff and it worked.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

This is a great started I'll be panting away when reading next chapter like this one.

I wish I had known you when I was writing my nasty story when a girl is raped to death. Because your stem word would have made nicer to read. Waiting for more, please.


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saddlerider1 4 years ago

3 Hot mamas indeed Martie, Cardisa and now theluestar. I'd rather be seduced by Cinema at 11 than the Twilight Zone any day:-0 I wonder if your challenge has sent up any to other fine sensual ladies in Hubville to follow suit with their wild fantasies let loose behind my chamber door. Oh my Vincent would be so proud to partake and I don't mean by scribing either. LoL...as Susan would say "Slap your Mama" with that hot Cajun spice to spice up not her delicious pork ribs, but our budoir. he he


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Hi Mike, that brings back memories. Cinema at 11, it was on every Friday and Saturday night and if I was lucky, my foster parents would allow me to go if I was with my boyfriend lol Thank you for the fond memories.


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

As they say here in the States, "Film at eleven" lol This should get lots of comments young lady.


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Mar, hunnie, and all this from a phone call. I will write and fill you in. I didn't expect this response, but rather thought I might have hit Hub Land behind doors with a few slapped wrists. Maybe I still will. Take it easy. TTYL. xx


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Cardissa, hunnie, you are the queen of sensual writing. You were one of the first people to challenge my attempts. I learned a a great deal from your soft and sensuous ways. lol I adore the way you write and have always been so happy to follow. xx


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

My dear Martie, It is amazing how the two of the biggest writers in Hub land are tempted to the honey pot lol With your poetry full of poetic sensual symmetry and my attempt at sensual creative writing, we will be known as the temptresses of Hub Pages. I am awaiting the blow out for this one. x


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Darling Colin, have a shaken your timbers hunnie? So many people have been telling me that I should attempt to write a novel in this genre. I am up to chapter 8 with one at the moment, but challenge came as a bolt out of the blue. I was a little bit afraid of placing it on HP, but I know that here I am among friends. So, what better place to ask for advice. Thank you for your amazing comments hunnie. xx


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Oh Ken, now I really am blushing. No where to hide now lol My secret is busted. Thank you hunnie for the support, you know I am grateful. Net:)


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Wow, Sista, you toned this down?

You, my dear girlfriend, are one passionate chocolate chip cookie! And I love me some chocolate chip cookies!

YOU GO GIRL...heading for the shower before I need to teach! Love you baby, Maria


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epigramman 4 years ago

...if this is a dream (yeah that kind of dream - lol) then don't wake me up - lol lol


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epigramman 4 years ago

...well Ken - we have just landed ourselves in a goldmine with three of the hottest and most talented women in all of hubland .......lake erie time 3:14pm


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Cardisa 4 years ago from Jamaica

I wish I could write with such finesse! It is so beautiful and certainly not vulgar. I am really impressed and proud of you Annette. This is amazing!


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saddlerider1 4 years ago

Heck Martie my sista, no surprise to see you here. Me thinks erotica finds you and your nostrils sniff it out and voila you appear on the scene. This is right up your alley I'm certain of that. Now getting back to unbuttoning his?? Lol and licking and sucking. Yikes, back in the shower again, twice now. I'm not coming back here. LoL..enoughs enough..LoL


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Phewww..... now I need a fire-extinguisher!

Excellent, Annette. I told you you have the sensual style needed to describe erotic scenes.

Goodness grief! I cannot move my toes! Voted up and erotic :)

OMW, and when I posted this comment, who will I see in here - my two flirt-buddies. Lol! Hahaha!


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epigramman 4 years ago

..damn that Saddlerider being the perfect gentleman and hub legend that he is - is keeping me on my toes - so here I go again with one of his recommendations - and very happy in doing it - for the most lovely Bluestar - and this wonderfully steamy erotica will be posted on my Facebook page with a direct link back here as I blush .......lol - is there a 'hot' button' I can push - always thought the fabulous BLUESTAR would outdo herself one day - lol - and here it is - in all of its carnal glory - love makes the world go around - and you definitely make my carousel go 'round and 'round too - happy year to you my fine and beautiful friend with wishes for your health happiness and prosperity - and yeah that's not too bad - two comments in a row from two very hot CANADIAN men - and all because of you .......

lake erie time ontario canada 2:22pm


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saddlerider1 4 years ago

LoL...I shared it in HubHoppers, can't wait to read the comments here. You are a master in your craft my friend, simply beauty at it's finest. Hugs


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thebluestar 4 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Ken, how you have just made me blush. I really don't believe that I am writing this for a dare. (I will let you into a little secret, I am enjoying myself.)Second scene tomorrow, providing I don't internally combust myself.


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saddlerider1 4 years ago

Oh my I'm glad to be the first to comment on this beautifully tastefully done piece of Erotica, I've already bookmarked this as it sizzled behind my page almost shorting out my computer, yikes. A perfect genre for you indeed, you melted me and the steam is still coming off my assets.

You vividly described a man's desire and how a real woman takes charge. I can't wait to read the next Act of passion and love making at it's finest. Let the play begin:-))) Steamy indeed...

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