An open door


Close the door and I’ll know for sure you don’t want me here anymore,

I let you in and I let you begin to nestle in my heart

-how did you pull so far apart?

I sit here and wonder at the love I’ve been under,

I know you held me up and now it’s all over.


I miss you, and I want you

But I think it’s the end

And I can’t defend

If you pull away without looking me in the face


And I held on to you in all I went through

While you were in my life

I feel so left

You walked out and shut the door

Without looking back so you won’t see me sore


So I can’t defend because you couldn’t face me in the end.

But I miss you dear friend

And I pray for your mend.

To heaven my hope I send

And I’ll let go of you, if you will

And my heart beat I’ll hold still


I’ll let you fly away

Spread your wings in a glorious display of hope and love

Because our God has already ordained all the precious blessings you will have.


But maybe one day you will come back to me I pray

And consider once more being my friend

For this would add beauty to what the Lord has already given me

And know that you are loved by me my dear and beloved friend



by gracefaith



It is a door- therfore it can still be opened

Definition of door:

"a movable, usually solid, barrier for opening and closing an entranceway"


When a door is closed upon a hope or dream, especially a relationship such as a friendship or family and hopelessness and sadness finds you, remember this,


Let not the solidness of the door be the issue. Only be sure to remember that it's entrance function has not been forgotten because it's close function has been used.

May the love of God be with you now and always.


Your sister

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RevLady 5 years ago from Lantana, Florida

Beautiful poem, wonderful pictures, great hub! Voted up!

Forever His,


CJ Sledgehammer 4 years ago

Beautiful words and imagery, Fiona, well done!!!

By the way, Happy 2nd Anniversary with Hubpages! :0)


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Lee-Franczyk 3 years ago from Philadelphia, PA

Very nice and filled with feeling.

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