And it was Dawn

Night is gone and there was no sleep

Conflicted voices wrestle within

Sliding under the sheets he feels her warmth

Engulfed in comfort, like the drink so long not known

A soft exhale, gently turning towards the ensuing grey

A touch of toes stirs beneath

The sound of birds taking flight

And it was dawn

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tnderhrt23 5 years ago

I like this alot! Paints quite a picture, with a few well chosen words. Voted up and awesome!


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MordechaiZoltan 5 years ago Author

Thank you very much tnderhrt!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

this was short and sweet. sleepless nights suck but waking next to the one you love is always a plus. playing footsie under the sheets, makes u wanna stay in bed all day


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MordechaiZoltan 5 years ago Author

Thanks Nikkigurl!


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lmmartin 5 years ago from Alberta and Florida

I think you've found your forte in poetry. Very beautiful.


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MordechaiZoltan 5 years ago Author

Thank you for your comment.


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Scarface1300 4 years ago

Short and sweet but says everything you need it to. Billiant


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MordechaiZoltan 4 years ago Author

Thank you for your comment Scarface. Sadly there is nothing but emptiness now, at least I got a poem out of it. Cheers!

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