Angellic Girl - Poetry

Beautiful girl, pale and white

dangerous curves on a heavenly body.

Eyes of brown warmth like a fire

set my soul alight with a sense of passion.

Her laugh lights up a sparkling personality.

She's quiet like death creeping up

and yet lights up the room

with a shy smile.

My feelings for her run deep

like veins in my body.

I know it's wrong, I should

not feel this but the frail

state of her soul captures

mine of a peaceful nature and

strong passion. Like a wave of lust,

she is a strong desire.

My beautiful angellic being,

you shall never know just how

deep my affections are for you.

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ladyjane1 6 years ago from Texas

Lovely poem really liked it. I have been practicing poetry myself of late. I have always wanted to be a poet, maybe not a great one but a poet indeed. Nice


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CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all? Author

thank you ladyjane. I am no poet but i practice my hand at it whenever inspiration strikes!


TattoGuy 6 years ago

Loved this my lil friend, I hope she did as well !


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CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all? Author

thank you tatoo! She was much younger than me and when she found out that this was about her, being a teenager, freaked out because she was straight and wanted nothing to do with me. But in the end, it's an experience to take with one in life.


sophs 6 years ago

This is absolutley beautiful! I loved it! You certainly are a poet CP :) keep up the great work


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CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all? Author

Haha thank you sophs! But i prefer to be the nonsense poet ;)


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Faybe Bay 6 years ago from Florida

Nice imagery and passion. Beautiful and inspiring. Now I want to write a poem too. But I have just to enjoy more of yours for now. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you...

sometimes wrongs are more beautiful when they feel right..

blaise loves Pixie's poems! :)


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CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all? Author

thank you faybe! you should write..

Haha thanks blaise


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aware 6 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

nice.


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Lita C. Malicdem 6 years ago from Philippines

You're a born poet for coming up with this nice poem. Very vivid passion. I hope it materializes with your love focus. Good luck my friend.


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CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all? Author

thank you Lita! it's always good to have a inspiring comment.


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stars439 6 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Excellent poetry. Very Nice. God Bless You.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Very nice poetry. Thank you! I'm so old- I don't know if I have the time to become a vampire. 4 years huh? I'm 60 now. I'm not sure I'll live long enough to finish the indoctrination. Thanks!


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pocketaus 6 years ago from Australia

A beautiful outlook. I look forward to reading more.

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