Annie Got The Gun


Annie Got The Gun!

She cocked her gun
with great resolve,
knowing just one way
to, this problem, solve.
She was not prone
to the vigilante,
but when he crossed that line,
he had upped the ante.
She aimed her pistol
and her aim was true,
with satisfaction sighed,
"Babe, this one's for you!"
She rid the world of
yet, one more perv...
as she smiled and said
"You sure had some nerve!
I'll teach you
to mess with mine...
I warned you once!
I'm no pantomime!"

Then she dragged his corpse
past the patio,
dug the grave last night,
by the dark moon glow...
As she tossed him in,
she had no remorse...
he had messed with hers...
had secured his course.
And sure as hell,
he would not be missed.
Let him feed her rose,
she could not resist.
Then she walked away
from this parody,
content to finesse
his little incest spree.

"Copyright 2011, All Rights Reserved."

That's all, Folks!

Comments 16 comments

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thebluestar 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

Great, lots of emotion in there. Well written.

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

smiles...thank you, thebluestar. It was a 4am write that took flight! LOL...

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justom 6 years ago from 41042

4am? I don't think I could sleep after these kinds of thoughts. Peace!! Tom

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

LOL, justom! I can't explain it...and must admit, it is a bit on the scary side...after posting, around 6, I layed back down and slept like a baby! geez...wonders what that means??? Thanks for the read and comment!

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justom 6 years ago from 41042

Probably means you have no fear :-D

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

not today...

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bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

You gotta love a strong woman, especially one with no fear =)

Just think, with your determination and my fat head, we could make a great luge team.

Nice poem No_...

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

LOL, bbnix, this was a strange little write... like I said, a 4 am write...but a fun one...thanks for your awesome comment!

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Amy Becherer 6 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Reminds me of a recent "Criminal Minds" I saw. Powerful, hit between the eyes, stuff!

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

Amy, Criminal Minds is one of my favorite shows...I didn't see the episode you are referring to, I don't think. But this one caught me off guard, as it fairly wrote itself...incest is an act that cripples the soul...thank you for your comment!

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Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

wow good one, vengence has never been so sweet!

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

thanks very much, nikki...there are few things that would drive me here but incest is one of them!

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janbee 5 years ago

"Awesome" my friend....I can so relate to this whole scenario... I have envisioned somewhat closely to that many times ,in my incestual lifetime..!! HUGS to you !!

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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

janbee, yes, I supposed that you would is a pretty crystal mental visual, in my mind, anyways! Now what does that say about me????? LOL...Hugs to you, my friend!

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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Wow. What a powerful, colorful tale! That's some astonishing writing!

No_Clue 4 years ago

Thank you, Max! This is one of my personal favorites.

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