Anonymous


Silence tears the distance between us
As the light shines thru the depth of my soul
Caressing every memory of unspoken word


Though one thousand and one confessions
I couldn't tell you
Yet, they will fly to you on silver wings


And my invisibility will truly be free...


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anusujith 4 years ago from Nilambur, Kerala, India

Coooooooooooooool


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Anu! Hows your angel?


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I never get tired of your poems. You cram so much into so little. Beautiful work once again my dear!


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

This is awesome M! So few words, but powerful emotion! Not many people can do that, so excellent job, keep up the great work! Sharing with followers!


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Janine Huldie 4 years ago from New York, New York

So simple yet so much crammed into this poem. I love it and am sharing and voting it up.


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

unknown spy..do I sense a need for a hug ? Your poem carries an underlying message..beautifully written and I hope the one you wrote it for appreciates your love/sentiment..have a great week-end


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Blueumbrella 4 years ago

Beautiful...


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heavenleigh707 4 years ago from The Invincible Heart of Neverland

So Beeeeeooooootiful! Thank you so much for this "essence of a grieving heart's hope." We know they are with us still - in a million ways - but it is wonderful to keep reassuring ourselves and others. Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)


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sharonchristy 4 years ago from India

beautiful!


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Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

You've said so much with such a small amount of words. This poem is really beautiful. I like it.


Larry Wall 4 years ago

Another beautiful poem. My only complaint is that you waited so long before you started to share your gifts with others. I think all of your followers look forward to your poems, so please do not stop. You have a lot to offer.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Unknown, I especially loved the first line, beautiful poem, and yes you say so much with so few words, well done.


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Virtual Treasures 4 years ago from Michigan

Absolutely beautiful!


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

What an epic quality this has M. You are beautifully skilled with expressing yourself, and this poem is a shining example of your talent. Voted up, beautiful, awesome, and interesting :) I love following your writing.


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Such a lovely poem. Few words but it says so much!


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mary615 4 years ago from Florida

Just shows: it doesn't take a lot of fancy words to created a beautiful poem. I voted this UP.


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Touching...

Some breaks create silence,

and it hurts...

great hub,

voted up


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Pain, such strange, fascinating flowers bloom from you


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Kimberly Vaughn 4 years ago from Midwest

Beautiful.


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

Beautiful,such a small poem that says so much.


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Beautiful words M.

LOL Ghaelach


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

@Billy, J, Janine, KJF, Blueumbrella, Heavenleigh, Sharon, Ryem, Larry, Jo, Virtual Treasures, James, Suzette, Mary, Girishpuri, Mhatter, Kimberly, Christin, Ghaelach,

wow, thank you thank you so much for the messages, for the votes and for the shared. I am so happy that you appreciates my poem.. ^;^ Take care!


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ChitrangadaSharan 4 years ago from New Delhi, India

Beautiful feelings in the form of a poem.


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Phelcky 4 years ago from Denmark

Like others above mentioned it's short, simple and packed with emotions. This is truely a great piece! :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Emotional. Tears are really messengers of sadness. Well said.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Beautiful!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

You created a beautiful results. Wonderful images both written and photographic,


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very beautiful!!!


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Debby Bruck 4 years ago

Anonymous it is when the words are not spoken with heart breaking. Thumbs up.


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

You can say so much, with so few words. That is amazing. Voted up!


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Tearful and touching words. It speaks volumes of a true love's loss.


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

Beautifully expressed, touched my heart. Voted up.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Chit, Gypsy, Lilly, Lesley, Shining, Ruby, Debby, Michele, Teaches, Vellur...

Oh guys, thank you so much for your nice messages! Love you all!


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi M. it is so incredible that in so few word you can express such meaningful feelings ! Well done !

Vote up and more !!!


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carter06 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

Very sweet, touching and...freeing!

U A B & Shared


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

@Kashmir & Carter,

thank you thank you!! I really appreciate your kind words. the votes and shared! Oh my. thank you so much ^;^


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

How beautiful - I really like this one, us. It portrays the viewpoint of being visible from a whole new perspective, and so beautifully portrayed, too! Voted up!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you Ann! I really appreciate your kind words :)


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CrazedNovelist 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

You're such a good poet. :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

(smiles*) thank you!


oceansider 4 years ago

Hi M., this was very lovely!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

heheh thank you Helen!


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Very deep, Spy! Sometimes the short poems say the most!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Yeah Brave! thank you much! God bless!

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