Apple High

Wow

It all started with the first bite

Crisp and juicy

I couldn't wait to have another

Crunchy and a bit tart

All I can taste is an incredible flavor

Unable to put it down

I looked for the next spot to plant my teeth

One loud crunch

The juiciest apple I have found

Not wasting another moment

I began to bite again and again

Each expectation greater than the next

As I chewed through to the core

I still wanted more

Holding all that is left

Just a stem and a tiny little piece

The apple is called Braeburn

Oh my it has made me want

I can't

I shouldn't

But I must

Go in the refrigerator and have another

When will my desire be filled

When there are no more apples to chew

Then and only then I will stop

But for now I will have to let you go

Chomp, chomp


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Nell Rose 23 months ago from England

lol! I always love your poems, made me smile! have a wonderful Christmas!


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DREAM ON 23 months ago Author

Neil Rose I try to bring some surprises to every day things. May your Christmas be special and all you want it to be. Happy New Year with lots of fun and love.Thank you so much for reading


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MsDora 23 months ago from The Caribbean

You do well if apples are the only food you find irresistible. Good verse.


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Jodah 23 months ago from Queensland Australia

You made my mouth water for that apple Dream On. Good write.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 23 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Bring on the apple pie!


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DREAM ON 23 months ago Author

MsDora Have you tried them ? If you have what do you think ?I was pleasantly pleased with such a mouth watering fruit. Jodah What is your favorite apple?Some apples are so big. One apple is enough for two people.Gypsy Rose Lee What a good idea. This way we can all have a slice. Thanks everyone for reading and sharing. Have a great night.


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prasetio30 23 months ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful poem and I love apple so much as one of the best fruits. Thanks for sharing with us. Vote up and have a nice day!


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DREAM ON 23 months ago Author

prasetio30 I love apples because they are filling and convenient to take with me wherever I go. Besides being nutritious and delicious. Thank you for reading and commenting. So nice to see you. I hope you have a Merry Christmas and a very happy and healthy New Year.


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Jodah 23 months ago from Queensland Australia

My favourite apple is "Pink Lady", and I don't mind a "Granny Smith". I like the smooth texture and slight tang.


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DREAM ON 23 months ago Author

Jodah I will have to try one. Once and awhile I will have a Granny Smith they are so tart my lips pucker. May your Christmas be exciting and filled with good times. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

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