Awwwsome Dad Sees Son Perform (limerick)

I went to see son in school play

Such talent did my boy display

Such poise not a faker

For all this dream maker

World’s best ticket taker I’d say


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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

Great one. We all have to start somewhere.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

A terrific final line that I didn't expect.


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Ha. Great twist at the end as always, very unexpected.

Voted up, awesome and funny

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

Great work and praise for your son. I know he will be a success because his dad is such a winner.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

LOL....there is a boy with a future!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Ticket sellers do well on Broadwaybecause they can get autographs easily.


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Any job is a great job when it's your kid. Speaking of this, Great Job!


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Always a surprise. And, a great reminder that every job is important and must be done by someone. A great job is a job done well. Great job!


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Pamela99 4 years ago from United States

That limerick is adorable and anything about our children is extra special. Your support of him will help him grow into a well balanced man. Awesome hub.


Valleypoet 4 years ago

His entrance was the best.LOL :-))


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Very nice. Jamie


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SweetiePie 4 years ago from Southern California, USA

Short, but cool!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Hey, Maybe someday he will be on stage making you a proud Papa. Loved it..


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

cute twist at the end! Enjoyed


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Awe - Such an adorable read my friend.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

LOL..take pride in your work - whatever it may be..

adorable, M..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Delightful!

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