Bait - Love Poem By Cathy Nerujen

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Keep this frequency clear - ya hear?
She is a secret agent -
she went all Triple X on me -
her scent was warm and fragrant -
I hollered out in stereo screams -
while in her lap, she rocked me -
my burns were more than
third-degree -
her beams of love
they shocked me -

I waved my right to a lawyer -
for her name
her type and number -
she used her thumb
screws on me -
till I screamed
above her thunder -

She laid it on
me good - that girl -
she flashed me with
her eyes -
she spun her web
around me -
and she clamped me
in her thighs.

Expecting Rain - poetry by Michael Madsen

Now I get -
I was meant
to be bait -
I was born - just to
be caught -
she numbed me
with sweet kisses -
and it felt like
I'd been shot -

I love her
like a pistol - now -
we both are
on the run -
we both have
fallen so in Love -
my honey - she's the One -

Bait - a poem by Cathy Nerujen
Bait - a poem by Cathy Nerujen

We doubled back
in double-time -
and coasted to
the sea -
then she kissed me twice -
her kisses nice -
she set my spirit free -

She saw right through
my plans and schemes --
and she always takes
my side -
it's on
the radio today -
we done a
"Bonnie and Clyde".
So keep this
channel clear - ya hear?
and tell the
world this fact -
I'm bait - and that's
my plan you see -
I'm never goin' back.

I wrote this abstract, humorous and loving poem for my sweet and loving Fehl Dungo, who is Blaise 25 on Hub Pages... (I admit I have been reading some hard-boiled detective stories here too.. hence the interesting hard-boiled tone above) ... and I dedicate this to you Fehl. And thank you Curly Cassy for the help with the earlier artwork, and support as always. Leave a comment and let me know how you like it.

Copyright (c) 2012 to 2016 Cathy Nerujen. All rights reserved. This love poem is published as part of a forthcoming book of romantic poetry by Cathy Nerujen, to be published in 2016.

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Wow, I thought i was into a Sam Spade tale looking for someone until i realized she was there in your lap, Cute and witty.. Loved it..Over and out ya hear..Cheers


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Cathy, this poem oozes with your love for Fehl. Beautiful!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Cathy, you are one talented writer. Very clever poem and very entertaining.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you...

Oh wow, this is hotter than the first time I read it in my email baby. :p I am so surprised at your photos here *smiling at you like crazy* Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! I love this so much. It's more than a hundred degree and it's making me wanna jump in your lap now and kiss you. Oh can I say that here..hehe

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaah! I love you. This is so beautiful and arousing. You melt me so much always.

----/-----(@


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Ruby. Yes Sam Spade would come to mind reading this. Heh. I like combining different things in a poem and switching context but still saying a big "I love you" in a poem to such a very special person in my life. Um, that's a big roger ten four. LOL. :)

Hi Martie, yes it is oozing and more besides. LOL. Than you. :)

Hi billy, I try to be different with new things but still be consistent.

Hi Fehl :) Oh wow, hotter? Really? Okay tell me later how much hotter... hehehe... Oh I am so brave with my photo choices. And then the hardest one is a portrait of you. I figured you'd be surprised. ;)

LOL. Jump in my lap... oh wow, I can't wait to chat you on Monday, honey. Heh. :)

I love you too... always and forever. I love your flower. Mwaaaaaaaah mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaah XOXOX


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SanneL 4 years ago from Sweden

Whew. . .so HOT!! Sizzling HOT !! What a witty and playful imagination you have. Great poem my dear!


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Love ,passion is on the air..! Go for it , life is short and beautiful , enjoy every piece of it !

Regards..


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Sannel, wow thank you for the hotness. LOL. I am smiling now too much. I love my poetry to be playful... :)

Your new poems are so amazing lately too. You are a born writer, and your poetry is beautiful.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Angel, yes passion is always never far. Life is what is meant to happen ....


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

Good one Cathy! I love the feel of this one. Very secret agent like and I love the Bonnie and Clyde idea. If you are the bait, I would most likely get caught in your fish hooks. ;) and never look back myself.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Nikki, yes I was reading some "hard-boiled" Philip Marlowe and some Ed Mc Bain books. Hehehe. They are fun and have a language and genre all of their own. I love playing with that stuff, and mixing nice romantic twists from my own life into it.

Bonnie and Clyde had a sticky ending. Maybe I should have found a better pair with a brighter future. LOL.

Oh wow, get caught in my hooks? Oh Nikki that is a sweet thing to say. That is so free... You get big warm hugs from me for that. Your words are like rich warm red wine. LOL.


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wisdom25 4 years ago from San Tan Valley

Lol. There's love in the air! Beautiful poem and sexy at the same time. Much love and respect.


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atlovesbm 4 years ago from Orange County, California

I love it ! :) It has a sexy rhythm to it.. You're such a talented & passionate writer.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi wisdom, yes love is beautiful. I am crazy deep in it up to my neck. Hehehe... And I love her too. Thank you for the comments. :)

Hi atlovesbm, I like rhyming poems and non-rhyming ones too. I am poetically flexible. LOL. I have to read more of your hubs too. Thank you so much :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

@atlovesbm... please write more hubs, especially the music hubs because I love the music choices you make. Have a sweet day.


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atlovesbm 4 years ago from Orange County, California

:) thanks and I will..Soon. hopefully. Lol Hope u have a great day.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you. I'm glad. I'm looking forward to reading your hubs. My work day is over. Chilling and reading with a cuppa tea. LOL. Take care. :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

truly wonderful, first about unbridled passion then about betrayal.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Vinaya. The events here are invented, just to clear that for you. Whereas the unbridled passion and sensuality is not invented, but very real. There is no betrayal as far as my wonderful lady is concerned. And this is meant to be fun and playful.

We girls like to have fun. :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Such an awesome wicked cool story (in a good way, of course!) =) Leading sensually up to complete meltdown in passion... wow!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi BeyondMax, being Bait is great when it is with that Very Special Person. LOL. It's nice to play games with context and roles. Poetry can be anything we want. :)


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michememe 4 years ago

This poem is HOT! I enjoyed the methapors that were used. Very descriptive.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Michelle, wow you are enjoying my poems today. :)

Yes it is hot and funny too. I will read more of your poems and hubs too. Have a sweet day, Michelle.


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michememe 4 years ago

You too! You write them so well.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Aw thank you so much, Michelle. :)


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Dr Funom Makama 4 years ago from Europe

Beautiful


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you Dr Funom.


IntegrityYes 4 years ago

WHOA! OH! Eat tasty jello! That is another awesome poem,Cathy. I voted up.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

That's a funny comment. And the vote is much appreciated. :)


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford

I wonder how I missed this fabulous poem. Simply beautiful and so full of love as always.


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi acaetnna, yaay you found it and that's what counts. I don't have that many hubs anyway. LOL. You are such a great follower of my poems and heaven knows I love your poems about love. Thank you so much. Have a sweet day, my friend. :)


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epigramman 3 years ago

Well let's get to the hot blooded manly part of my comment first

dear Cathy - in reference to the young lady holding the gun - my oh my she has the most beautiful stomach I have ever seen - oh yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh baby!! lol lol lol lol

I could fry eggs sunny side up on that stomach. lol lol

You know if Quentin Tarantino read your hot words of poetic action here he would sign you up as his next screenwriter.

Mister T often empowers women in his world of cinema as you know and this explosive daring piece really fired up my cinematic dreams as well and I could taste it, smell it, hear it and see it -and that to me is really great writing. So glad I found this page even if the picture turned me on, lol lol

I will see you on FB with a post and link for everyone to see and read and I just sent you a nice surprise on your FB wall from yours truly and his cat crew at lake erie time 12:14am


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hehehe. :P Colin, you are so manly. I don't know who the girl with the gun is, but she fitted the purpose of this romantic hub. It helps that she is good looking. LOL.

Gosh, if Quentin wants to send me a message here, I would be so happy. I a a big fan of his work. I am a member of Stage32 anyway. Mister T makes me think there is a great poem in this somewhere and I would love to read it, if it happens.

Well I am glad you always find my poems and love them so much, Mister Epi. Your new books are published. I can't wait to read the ones I bought on Amazon. :)

And yes, I saw the sweet card and I love the flowers in this. Aww, you get so many hugs for this Colin. You are so nice. Mwaaah. I hope the cats are well and behaving themselves. Have a sweet day in beautiful lake Erie.

Cathy. xx


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epigramman 3 years ago

Actually Cathy I am just using this as an excuse to take another look at that woman's incredibly beautiful stomach - lol - and your life affirming smile of course but as you know I am forever the promoter - please check out Rose the Planner if you can - you will love her hubs and I will ask the same of Rose to come on over here.

Sending you my warmest wishes from Colin, Tiffy and Gabriel to you and your sweetheart

lake erie time 9:59pm


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rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

I was asked by our mutual friend to stop by and check out this awesome poetry. WOW!!!! I am so happy that I did. This is a spectacular piece of work. You are a talented poet. Thank you for sharing. (Voted Up) -Rose


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

OMG... Colin her tummy is so flat. She obviously cares about her figure so much. I like that picture of her, as it suits the hub and the title.

Oh you are a flatterer, Mister Epi. Hehehe. I have a Life affirming smile? Really? H'mm...

I would be so delighted for Rose to check out my hubs and my romantic poetry. Her name is familiar to me. Please convey my cuddles to Tiffy and Gabriel and hugs for you, Colin. Fehl and Cassy say hi back to you as always. :)

Have a sweet day and I love your new hubs these past few days. You are a great writer as always. Your black cat photo is so like our cat Max. LOL. :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Rose. Thank you for reading my "Bait" hub. I have another one that is inspired by Epigramman himself and dedicated to his brilliant wry writing style. Check out "Prefer to inferment of Love's Germaine" as it is very funny. Thank you for popping by. Have a sweet day. :)


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rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

I will check it out right now. Take care! -Rose


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you Rose. Bless you. :)

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