Be WARE OF THE COLORS OF LOVE

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Be WARE  of THE COLORS OF LOVE

My heart aches,

Waiting for the last beat;

In the castle of life,

In the jungle of my thoughts;

Like the spring butterfly;

She came,

She saw,

And she sucked,

The essence of life;

And left;

Left,

My heart;

In the prison of life;

Waiting for the last beat,

To survive.

Copyright© Asma Iftikhar

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Mac McGovern 5 years ago

The creativity and imagery are superb. One of those short poems that grabs and holds. The talent is obvious.


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gailalovesbijou 5 years ago from Wyomissing, PA

Beautiful, sad, thought provoking. "Jungle of my thoughts" is such a perfect line. Thank you!


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks gail for liking and appreciating my poem.


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks mac thats my honor that you like my poem.


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Cloverleaf 5 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

Awesome composition, so dark and mysterious - as love can sometimes be! I hope she comes back to brighten up those colors. Voted up!


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks clover for reading and commenting on my hub.and for following me .Thats your kindness and humbleness that you like my work.many many many thanks.


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mondkill 5 years ago

lovely poem... :) I LIKE! VOTE UP....


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks mondkill for stopping and commenting on my hub.And feel good to see you here after along period.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Sad and bitter. Words stretching my own thoughts. Awesome and beautiful, i voted.


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Many many thanks for liking and appreciating my poem.Thats your kindness that you like my hubs.


lilly 5 years ago

i found this hub and your thoughts insist me to write a comment that its a lovely worth praising poem..wd come again..waiting for other gems.. :)


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks lilly for stopping and commenting on my hub.would write more inshalla.


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shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

Hey My Dear Friend! Its a very Heartfelt poem. Truly came from Heart it seems. Love to read.

Voted up, Awesome, Interesting.

With Love & Respect

from SHANAYA:)


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kerlynb 5 years ago from Philippines, Southeast Asia, Earth ^_^

And she sucked,

The essence of life;

And left;"

- Very thought-proving lines. Very deep, mysterious. Well-written poem, congratulations :)


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks Kerlynb for liking my poem. i know you are not very interested in poetry but thats my pleasure u red that poem and like it.


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shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan

Genius at work ,Concentration Required .

Great Lines


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks Shobis for liking my hub and suggestion.


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shobis 5 years ago from Pakistan

Suggstion is for the readers not for u :)


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks Shobis for the clarity.thanks a lot dear.


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Bella Nina 5 years ago from USA

Words beautifully woven.


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks Bella for liking and commenting on my hub.


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epigramman 5 years ago

.....yes these are words of poetic majesty and the beauty is all here on your canvas to see .....

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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

thanks epi thats my honor that you like my poem.many many thanks for encouraging me.


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Taut yet tender, this packs a powerful message.

I am very impressed with you style and will eagerly come back to check out more of your work. Voted UP & AB, mar.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Yessss. very nice. i like it.

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