Poem Being Good!

Being Good!


It’s a helpless

feeling

At that moment

When you are

Experiencing

The pleasure of

Looking at someone

That you know

maybe don't know

Doing a great deed

being a great person

Just simply

"doing good"

There is this feeling

That gets a hold

Inside of you

It’s a feeling of

helplessness

But there is this

bigger feeing

Which reminds you

of something

That you need to do

But at that moment

Maybe there is

nothing whatsoever

That you can do

But experience

that feeling which

just simply holds you

overwhelms you

Nothing you can do

To stop yourself

Needing to cry

Do something

That you know

will ofset this

feelings

and it's also

very good to do

It cannot be faked

It’s not something

That you would

give one day

Then suddenly

take back the other

can't work that way

It’s convincing

It comes only from

deep within

It's that part of you

that connects you

to God himself

Which commands

That great feeling

of mixed compassion

and emotions

nothing more real

Wanting to laugh

Wanting to cry

Wanting to jump

for joy

Wanting to keep on

floating up high

Wanting to

help somebody

Wanting to show

some mercy

Wanting forever

be happy

Wanting to neve

ever want

Not to know

how how it feels!


Being good !

Bless:

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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Yes poetvix in this particular situation , forget the polls.

Thank you so much dear lady, see how quickly I referred to the polls , that was a tribute to you , I am coming your was real soon.

Again I must go to my mom as she sang all these little songs of kindness including this very one so long ago,

Today she gave me a story of a time before I was born , how she met my dad. I know it's great exercise for her mind and also a stimulant so I urged her on , as I listened.

Yes those little Good things poetvix, those are what matters.

Sincere thanks .

Bless.


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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

You always remind me of the power of goodness. This is wonderful. The small acts of kindness we see in our lives, for me at least, sometimes get over shadowed by the bad. Thank you for reminding me one is greater than the other, regardless of numbers.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

I this word ever needs an interpreter for Mr. WD leave out the Curry, might be hot for some. But not yours truly.

Thanks my brother , yes let the children sing they are our future.

Thanks for your always ,better understand what he means Comments . I Do!

Bless.


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WD Curry 111 4 years ago from Space Coast

Being a good poet? "It can't be faked"

Your photos were no fakes either. They are spot on. I love the pushers. We need that kind on every corner.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

I answered you and it disappeared , but that's ok I am going to smile and write you another. I actually thought you were out of town Cindy 10. lol

Thanks very much for stopping by reading and leaving such a beautiful comment.

You are correct it takes so much more effort to rise and have a bad , upset day , than to rise give thanks and then come what may.

Lets hope the first comment comes back , because it was longer. Thanks for stopping by and I will get over your site soon. You now have a bonus I will leave then both.Give Thanks

Bless.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you Cindy , I am happy that you read this poem to leave such a beautiful comment . And you are so correct they are missing out. It really doesn't take a whole lot to sit for one second to say to oneself, why am I in this mood or that mood, as long as you are breathing you should be enjoying your time doing great things and if you are unable ask somebody you admire and trust, but the very for one should be your belief.

Thanks for stopping by and would return the deed soon.Stay well.

Bless.


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Cyndi10 4 years ago from Georgia

This was a nice poem to savor. Being good, doing good does make one feel good. I think a lot of people lose out on the feeling . Thanks for sharing.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thanks you brethren , always as I told you before, a great pleasure having you read and comment.

This is a mission and I can't just hop of it is simply passing through here,maybe this is where it meant to pick up speed. But I know something good is here.

I can get off HP but not off this mission, that's why I am doing it's for free.

Even if I want to I can't stop this story have to be told by me . This is not the book it's pieces of it.

I may not have the confidence of being politically correct or grammatically sound, but that can't stop me on this mission. This is a continuing saga that started before I came around.

I thank you for the role you are playing , if at any time it hurts you , then you must know what to do , because it's should never hurt, or take away, and nothing from nothing =

YOU SHOULD BE SMILING!I AM.

Thanks brethren.

Bless.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you Cardisa it means plenty when you find something good out of it. That what I see as most important in this life , to be able to recognize the road that you are on and what you will take with you on that road .

Can't take everything , only the need.

Thanks for reading and this special quote that you like .

Give thanks.

Bless.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

I forgot to add.. that when you do good you feel good-- but today it's so much easier being bad.. I mean look all around us.. so yeah this was a very good Hub my friend :)


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

You know Sky.. the reasons I like your writing.. because sometimes it overwhelms.. and then hits the aimed target.. you write with conviction OFFset I think not ofset.. but hey you're still the master of this writing domain bru..:) Frank out!


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Cardisa 4 years ago from Jamaica

I especially like the part where you said that those feelings cannot be faked. I like this one Sky, very good!

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