"Betrayal"-Poem

Betrayal

Flowers have lost their fragrance,

Stars have lost their shine.

I sit by my window

And think about you all the time.


With tears in my eyes

And the pressure my heart bears,

I wake up & realise-

"Life isn't just fair"


All your promises; All ur lies

Remind me of your betrayal, day & night.

You cheated me, you made me cry

The feelings within me are destroyed.


You asked me to trust you

You asked me to rely..

Yet in a blink of an eye

You bid Good-Bye.


You said you would be there

You sweared you would stay.

You said it was forever

You promised u would never go away!


You taught me to love, you taught me to care

You were my world,my heart,my air.

You cleared my doubts when I was mistaken

And filled my heart n soul with affection.


There were times when I couldn't walk,

You gave me the strength to run.

There were times when I wanted to talk,

You were always there to listen.


You were always so good & full of fun

How was I to know you would leave me without a single explanation?

You said you loved me, I thought you were the one

How was I to know You would leave me all bruised and shaken?


© Copy right Hajira Ehsan

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Stigma31 5 years ago from Kingston, ON

sad sad poem...I really liked it


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Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore Author

Betrayal and infidelity is always sad and so are the bitter words. Thank u for stopping by and taking the time to leave a comment.. Glad you liked it ;))

Have a great day!!


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork

your heart seem to be broken

however your heart will heal with time

betrayal and infidelity is so close to a crime.

it rob your soul

it leave you so empty

it unbearable even to rest.


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4elements 5 years ago

I know where you speak from with this. i have been betrayed myself and it was the worst kind of pain. Left me questioning myself, if it was my fault, was I not good enough and more, but in the end i saw it was meant to be, so sad I was but i knew i would be alright. Thank you for sharing


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cynamans 5 years ago from Washington DC

Great Poem, I'm voting this one up and awesome!


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

OUCH and I am so sorry if this is non-fiction. Love can sure hurt but we can learn from it once the hurt subsides a bit.


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CMCastro 4 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

So Sad but very Beautiful.


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore Author

Thank you all. It hurts when betrayed but all wounds heal with time.

Peace!


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PegCole17 4 years ago from Dallas, Texas

Dear Hajira, I'm deeply touched by the depth of emotion you've conveyed here in this meaningful verse. It is a sad reality that life throws us these kind of curves. Know that as beautiful as you are inside and out, this too will pass.

May God send you his blessings.

Love from your friend, Peg.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

All wounds do heal with time and I find that writing really helps! peace to you!


mel 4 years ago

very sad and its true , i like it , its straight up.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Hi Hajira.. Is this only a poem or this happened? Betrayal hurts way too much.


F. 4 years ago

A heart that has not been broken, has never loved.

The moment you love someone or something, you sign up to be hurt.

Its a subconscious risk you take willingly, but you never know that you do.. ;)

"Living might mean taking chances but they're worth taking

Loving might be a mistake but its worth making...

- Lee Ann Womack"


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore Author

@Pegcole17- You are so right Peg. All things pass and the hurt I was feeling has been passed too. I'm in a better place now.

Thank you for reading :)


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore Author

@Audreyhowitt- Time does seem to heal all wounds. Thank you for visiting and taking the time to leave a comment..

Take care


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore Author

@Mel- Thank you.. I'm glad u liked it


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore Author

@Ubknown spy- I know Spy. It is excruciating to be betrayed by someone who meant the world to you. It is a part of my life's story..

Thank you for reading..

Have a nice day


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore Author

@F. - Very well said! Thanks for reading and leaving a wise comment.

I needed to hear that.

Take care :)


IntegrityYes 4 years ago

That is an awesome poem,Hajira. You released a lot. You are going to be all right. So many so-called good people get exposed for who they truly are. They should know better. That guy will pay dearly unexpectedly. I am glad that you were able to move on rapidly. Get through every day,your way.


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore Author

@IntegrityYes- Aww you are always so kind Orion. Its always a pleasure to read your hubs as well as comments as u pump up the readers with loads & loads of hope.

Thank you dear Friend..

Take care


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CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

You have beautifully expressed the pain in your heart through this poem. Nicely penned and emotionally-captivating. I wish you well.


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web923 4 years ago from Twentynine Palms, California

A lot of feeling... well written and I enjoyed it very much! Just got another follower!


Ausseye 3 years ago

Hi ArmondCase: Feel your loss and the empty space left as all voids are. But you knew love, whooo, now you know what it is and how to care and bee( yes sting) with someone else. He left but you now have a standard. Be strong be the future, give your love as it should be given…pure and simple. It will be returned…true love always is, just not in the way we all expect it!!

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