Beyond Reality

Clueless to advances

Weeping corners lie below

Anger disheartened

Stirring sharp pain

A pin twisting deep

Taking the power

That is mine

Making it yours

A coward you are

Only to try

Your false face

Makes me laugh

Some others might cry

I see through you

In disgust

I watch your weakness

Creeping slowly

Disturbing me in my sleep

Oh how you pretend

Your phonieness all a disguise

You are the wolf

In sheep's clothing

Waiting to pounce

To suck dry

You will lie

Cheat and steal

Nothing surprises me

Some may think it's beyond reality

To me

It's how you deal

So when you come close

Ah ah

Do not touch

Hearts don't grow fond

Of those you

Want to chop up

And eat

You're hateful sense

I despise the most

Everything you do is so cheap

So next time you say

Come a little closer

My dear

Give this a try

Be prepared

For those who know you

To say goodbye

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Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

carolinemd21,

Good Morning,

Thank you for this POWERFUL PIECE!!!!!

God put these words in your mouth and you have spoken them to a 'demon' that is trying to take MY life.

Satan is a liar and so are ALL OF HIS COWARDS!!!!

Voted way way way up!!!!

God Bless!

Ciao...Princess Prisca


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Princess - what a great name. I am glad that my poem helped you in anyway it could. Thank you for reading and commenting.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

carline..wow I loved it.. so far tops today :)


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Peggy W 4 years ago from Houston, Texas

Wow...I guess you told that person to "go" or "leave me alone" in no uncertain terms! As Princess said, this is a powerful use of words and imagery!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

You go Girl!! Great use of rhyme....


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline, you are the BEST. You sweet wordsmith, you can hammer home your feelings like a sharp blade in full swing.

Much Love,

Michael


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Wow Caroline ! I remembered the snake lol. Is this the answer? You have captured a zone and you have captured it well I almost see you in a one woman play of sorts. This is great and flowing nicely from great feelings.

For those who know you

To say goodbye

Those pics remind me of a movie I saw many years ago called Scanners.

There you said it.

Bless.


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Dexter Yarbrough 4 years ago from United States

Hi Caroline! Another powerful use of the written word!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Hi Frank wow I am honored by that comment. :)

@ Peggy thank you for your kind words and for reading!

@ Thank you Ruby! You are awesome!

@ Michael LOL thank you! That is a wonderful compliment. Always a pleasure.

@ Sky LOL this is the answer to any snake. Thank you for your comment. I am glad you liked this one. It seems the times I write with raw emotion, the writing comes out great. I think I saw that movie sounds familiar. Great pix right? I loved them when I saw them too. Till we write again.

@ Thank you very much Dexter. Always great to see you!


stessily 4 years ago

Caroline, The pen is mightier than the sword! Every emotion which you tackle, you express it fully! All snakes should cringe at these words, which serve as a clear mirror of those twisted serpentine minds.

Bravo!

Kind regards, Stessily


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wow real powerful coming right at you. The words alone hit home.


The Fastionista 4 years ago

What a haunting poem, Caroline - So full of passion, and so empowering, as I've come to expect from your work :) but uniquely its own. Excellent job - voted up and awesome!


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prasetio30 4 years ago from malang-indonesia

I love the way you express your imagination through this poem. Beautiful and awesome. I love the pictures as well. Thank you very much. Good job and rated up!

Prasetio


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Voted up and awesome. Perfect title Caroline. This is an awesome poem. The way you place your words and your word choice makes this a powerful poem. Shows the great talent that you have.


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Very, very, interesting pictures to illustrate your moving poetry, Caroline. And that pretty smile in your newest profile picture tells me you've moved far beyond what prompted this poetry.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline, i already wrote on your great poem but I had to tell you about your pic. Beautiful, what a smile glad to see that you have evolved into that strong vivacious woman. Love

Michael


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

Wise choices need not still voices; just change the topic to the realities of real love and mutual, deep commitment.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Stessily thank you for the sweet comment!

@ Gypsy thank you!

@ The Fashionista thank you! Missed seeing you around! Glad you liked it. :)

@ Prasetio thank you very much!

@ LyricWriter thank you I am flattered by your words. :)

@ SubRon thank you very much for your compliment. I am glad you like my picture and poem.

@ Michael thank you!

@ Perspy thank you for the comment! Very true words that you say.


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Caroline,

Reality can suck. I feel the anger and hurt in your words and the pictures. Amazing!

Voted up and away

Take care


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

very powerful emotions here caroline...you zip it up...


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Sueswan thank you! Glad you liked it.

@ Raciniwa thank you. :)

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