Biding Time


I can see through the curtain behind your eyes

its a gateway

to your body and soul

beyond all truth and the lies


I can feel your presence

in this emptiness

the ever growing hollow

of this nothingness

this gaping hole in my heart 

widens further as we part


you bade your farewell

and i'm biding time

waiting patiently

as you commit the perfect crime


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

hmm seems there should be more to this...


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

thats the idea. its as incomplete as i felt when i wrote this ;)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

and actually that makes it complete, i re-read it and really it doesnt needed adding to. your just biding your time as she makes the perfect crime...in leaving you. thats what i get anyway.


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

yea thats what its about. sadly. lol


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

eh people come and go out of our lives, its the ones that stay that matter.


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

yeah i guess.


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La Papillon 5 years ago from Melbourne, Australia

Love on a thin glass shelf, dances precariously.

The heart and the soul, weighted heavily, as anticipation of a faltering lingers.

Sinister, patient and hopeful thinking?.....

Or a longing for a return?

;)


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

i've put my heart out on the broken shelf.. my soul has worn out.. love long lost, without a trace, no longing for return.. sinister eccentricism, impatience and well dying dreams is all i'm left with. hahahah oki that sounded too dark. i think i should write some more dark poetry now..


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

this was very eloquent, a beautiful yet tragic write of loss...


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

=D gracias!! I've lost my touch.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

no you havent you just got lazy and dont wanna write anymore lol


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

haha.. thats partly true, maybe cause i don't wanna write about sad stuff anymore :P


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

u can write about happy stuff :)

u can write stories.


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

one has to be happy first :p haha


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

u can pretend. lol believe it long enuf it might come true. haha. so write sum fictional stories or sumthing. entertain us. hehe. or sum funny stories from work.


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

well, yea i think i will. Just caught up in some work these days.. that can't be ignored ;)


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

hahahah!! no, no.. interviews n stuff. I hope i make it. It went good i think. so they'll inform me of its outcome on monday. pray for me.. plus editing my friend's dissertation. ;)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

cool cool. will do. good luck!


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

gracias!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

de nada :)

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