Poem : Big Deal!

Big Deal!

So you started

This new job

Today

Two hours

Into the gig

You got

Screamed at

By you’re boss

Big deal!

Ask yourself

Do you need

The Job?

So you are

Off to work

You decide on

Using public

Transportation

Big deal

There is no

Big deal

Really

Suddenly

You don’t feel

To well

End up

Throwing up

On the bus

Big Deal!

You got off

Just like the rest

Of us

Who rides those

Busses and Rails

every day

Big Deal!

There you go

Calling mother

She’ on the

Phone

The line is busy

So many time s

You left home

Alone

Big deal

She will be calling

You after hours

Big girl now

Big deal

Now you trying

You’re younger

Brother

His phone is off

He had ask you

Foe r a few dollars

To get some

Batteries

You brushed him

off Big deal

Now you are really

In something

Who else can you?

Call

Big deal.

A word to the wise

Is enough

Your parents always

Warn you about

Those kinds of

Stuff

Remember saying

Big Deal

Bless.

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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Hey little sis , how 's the going? Great of you to stop by and grace me with such thoughtful comment.

Hoping all is well and this is the start of great things to come.

Big brother the same.

Bless.


jlal 4 years ago

Esaier said than done, but we are remined to take lefi in stride. It"s all good!


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

That's why I say Big deal , but the kids that really made their parents proud , somehow the magician that are great mothers /parents they make a way to find those types of kids whatever they need. it's a two way street.

Thank you "AE"

Bless.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Kids are learning the economy is bad, they can't have everything they want...Big Deal...


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Yeah its seems to be no big deal , just try to be good especially to those in the family you never know. Thanks for reading Caroline.

Bless


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

Big Deal! LOL. Made me smile Sky. :)


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

No big deal Cardisa , none at all , it's all in the message be nice to the people on your way up because they are the one you will meet coming down from that ladder of life .

I remember when my Jerri curl was bouncing! lol

Bless.


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Cardisa 4 years ago from Jamaica

What's the big deal?


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

That's what I say my brethren. Thank you very much as always for waking as you supposed to , with peace and harmony.

Bless.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

Very well done Sky.. and I liked it so Big Deal!


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

That's the whole idea, somewhere between 1 and before they leave home.

Not all, but quite a few, some how they feel that they have learned more than their parents.

But God is quite precise in his appointments and I know what kind of Dad you are.See what some of us do with God's Law . Look at our futures, if any.

It's still your fault if you had stopped them from getting it. But only in their minds . So -Big deal.

Bless brother.


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WD Curry 111 4 years ago from Space Coast

I have two daughters. They were easy until they hit fourteen. Now they are in their twenties and they are easy again. The tatoo won't wash off . . . Big deal.

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