Birth of Great Love

Birth of a Great Love

Yearning and searching for love they have hungrily wandered the world
Over and over again only to find something so unkind, partners blind
Unaware of a great love lurking beneath the shadow, the weeping, and the tears

Reality was shifting, stars were aligning, and fate was smiling down

Love would find its way, for destiny itself had sought not to prevent

One couple who wanted to bridge distance and time with such intent

Voices like echoes that sought to climb out of the shadows and find

Each in the other, that great undiscovered land where

Chance and luck bowed down and sought not to intervene

Happiness instead chose to follow, Sunshine erased bits of sorrow

Ambivalent lament took discontent, and found another to bother

Nothing but love they could see in the other, giving them freedom to discover

Greatness of soul, which could not control, hearts bursting with spring

Every song had new meaning; birds started singing, shadows quickly faded

Damning voices no longer, they found their love was stronger, than anything that

Might start to invade, they took heed but would never concede

Young world they had found, laughter profound, with smiles to melt any shadow

Weathering storm with ferocious new faith, and love unrestrained

Old souls with young love, blessed from above, riding life’s turbulent path

Restless and wild, yet tender and mild, compassionate few, with strength renewed

Love with them never to fail, for forged one with the other, promises and more yet to

Discover, a bond strong and eternal, unbreakable and true.

Your love changed my world.

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scriber1 6 years ago

A journey well related, and it would seen, well spent. All the best....:>)

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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland Author

Thank you so much for visiting, and yes, a lovely journey indeed! thanks so much :)

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richtwf 6 years ago

Love is the fuel that drives us and makes us unstoppable and can make the impossible possible!

Beautiful poem Erin and God bless you.

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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

Beautiful - awesome -well done. What a treat to read!

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Piper Day 6 years ago

I really like the sense of optimism in your poetry and how you build up hope from despair - tenderly, without forcing it (which seems to be your signature). "Sunshine erased bits of sorrow" - so sensitive yet vivid. Lovely! Keep it up, Erin.

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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland Author

Thank you so much for your kind comments. I never realized I had a signature until now, so I humbly thank you ever so much for that! I suppose its a mirror to how I live my life, softly and tenderly building hope from despair. I suppose that's a wonderful way to look at one's life!

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b. Malin 6 years ago

Very enjoyable take us for a lovely ride in Birth of Great Love, Thank you.

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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland Author

Thank you so much for reading b. and your lovely words. If I was able to take you along with me, then I am delighted! Its what we all try to do in the end :) Namaste'

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pennyofheaven 6 years ago from New Zealand

The birth of love is the most wonderful thing and your weaving of words describe the coming into being so beautifully. Gives me much pleasure to read.Thanks!

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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland Author

Thanks for visiting again Penny, and your thoughtful voice. I'm so glad you enjoyed this hub. I so enjoyed writing it - it was one of those that was just bursting at the seams to be put on paper!

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epigramman 6 years ago

.....well this is not exactly a birth of great love from me about your great writing - because I have known that for some time now - so let's just say - a rebirth!!!!!

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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland Author

Epi, thanks again for visiting my pages! you always are so very kind in your comments. I'm taking you with me to my publisher. :)

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vietnamvet68 6 years ago from New York State

the Birth of Great Love, so beautifully written and one that I can surely relate to. God Bless, Happy Holidays

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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland Author

thank you vietnamvet68, so wonderful to have you here and I'm so glad you found a piece of your own heart in my words. Happy Holidays to you as well and a brightest blessings to all for a wonderful new year! Namaste'

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always exploring 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

I enjoyed your poetry of new found love ,the season,weathering the storms of life,very beautiful.Thrilled to follow you.


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pennyofheaven 6 years ago from New Zealand

I just had to read this again! The depth and beauty surrounds me as I do. I get something new every time! Makes me in love with love! Thank you for your special gift!

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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland Author

always exploring, im so glad you enjoyed this. I so enjoyed writing it. Love can be so wonderful and certainly the greatest shelter from any storm as well as the inspiration of most of history's poetry! (Whether it was love found or love lost...) I am also thrilled to follow you! Namaste'

Sweet Penny, you know you are always welcome back but thanks for commenting again! If it is a special gift I have its that some goddess is whispering sweet words into my ears so that I can write wonderful words on the computer to compose such depth and beauty. Otherwise, I wouldn't know from where it comes. But thanks dear sister and Namaste'

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