Bitter Past (poem)

My bitter past comes back to me

Across the tears which formed a sea

Whose waves would shape a destiny

Of all that I have come to be

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The dreams which used to keep me warm

Have drifted off and lost their form

Lost loneliness is now the norm

And run away from every storm

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But there she was in front of me

Al I desired had taken form

Her happiness was now my norm

As by her side I’ll always be

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We built a home and kept it warm

At sunset stroll a lovers’ sea

Such Joy had kissed our density

How could we see approaching storm

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For tortured times which use to be

Forged murder in my destiny

Her blood became my endless sea

My bitter past comes back to me

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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

I like the dark ending. Your poems are varied and intriguing, and I enjoy reading. You don't disappoint.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Powerful words to show off your talent at its best Martin.

Eddy.


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Ericdierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Wonderfully done friend


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Amazing dark poem. It was spine-chilling.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

So well written, it evokes the darkness of past sins catching up with the present.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Splendid work, Martin.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

this one certainly makes the reader think. So many questions come to mind; the biggest being did he kill her?


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Intriguing and dark.

What tangled webs our emotions weave!

Splendid work, Martin.

DJ.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Emotional and deep Passing this on.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Sounds like something that someone in San Quentin might say...

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