Bitter Winds (tanka)

Watching helplessly

As the bitter winds reclaimed

Streets which he cared for

In the sunny days if his youth

When he was the bitter wind


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bravewarrior 17 months ago from Central Florida

Maybe he can help teach the new generation how to mend their ways!


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Minnetonka Twin 17 months ago from Minnesota

Nice job on the Tanka poetry form.


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The Examiner-1 16 months ago

Interesting Martin. I guess that he was never like that anymore. I voted it up, shared and pinned it.

Kevin


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tillsontitan 16 months ago from New York

Funny how becoming an adult changes our perspective on the things we did in our youth!

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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