Black Grooves

Black and white defines the lines

That wrap around like vines

Hemorrhaged wells of ink

That connects in every way and link

Would it be documented history?

Even though it may not be my story

But in a way be her story

Or would it be blank like a mystery

There are no wrongs or rights in this

Or it can badly go amiss

Taken from a graphic technique

A delineation of form so unique

Essential features without details

Given exact on a shade of grey scale

A rough draft to what it may be

Subsequent elaboration for you to see


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Binaya, thanks pal!! :)


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

You rock my dear sista Bella. I love the sensations of mystery evoked here.

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Car, Thanks Mz. I felt a bit unclear today lol ;)


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Ebower 5 years ago from Georgia

This displays wonderful word choices. I voted this up and beautiful!

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cherrycrime26 5 years ago from NY, Now Living in Atlanta Ga

Cool Poem!

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Poetic Fool 5 years ago

Bella, lovely wordcraft here that leaves you wondering ... wanting more. Voted up and awesome.

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Tankadin 5 years ago

Enjoy reading your very interesting words!

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september girl 5 years ago

Artistic, is what I see in your writing. : ) Thought provoking too.

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samiaali 5 years ago

Very nice Bellawritter23! I liked it very much. :)

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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

Leaving a lot to the imagination.... I like that.. stories unfold and unfurl... like our own histories! Nicely formed!

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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

artzy fartzy lol that drawing is pretty spectacular. and I like the poem too, great way to describe writing!

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