Blah...


Forget everything bout you

In time I could

I can’t believe

You won’t be on my mind

Again

You won’t linger

Surely

You won’t affect me

And

I won’t die once more

I will never be the same

I won’t need you insanely

I won’t be missing ‘us’

Out of the blue

I know

I’ll wake up

Not chasing you

I am finally

Sure

I am over you…



***Of course this was written backwards! You absolutely know I can’t be over you! (Look who’s starting to read from the bottom ;p)



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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

The poem is prophetic in any manner!


Justine76 6 years ago

oh my....mad/sad/over it..joy..sad/mad....what love does to us!!


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

This is excellent writing, Blaise...


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Wow, Blaise. Getting over someone is very tough. They leave a taste in our mouth, so-to-speak. And the feelings linger. I have been in that position too many times. But you are brave and tough to put it here and shout it out to the world. Way to go! : )


Justine76 6 years ago

that must have took alot of spaces to start. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Mentalist Acer, thank you! either way, yea :)

Hey, Just! haha yea crazy love..I ended up writing this silly poem ;) Thanks a lot

Moulik, hey! Thanks. Wonder why it's excellent :p

Hi moi friend! Some orange vodka made me even more braver LOL But I'm really not that tough enough...Such taste is so hard to resist..Glad to see you as always ;)

Hi again, Just! :) Pretty pic, you're beautiful! The start is always the hardest..


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

This is fun !!!


Justine76 6 years ago

thank you and yeah..the start, what a kick in the pants!! :)


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Maybe! That would great! Over him/her/us! Maybe!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello CM! Yep silly fun..like a rewind heheh But someone said it still sounds the same. ekk whatever :)

Hi, Just! Yep, totally excruciating..

Hey, Mik! Sometimes I like 'maybes' ;)

Thanks to you guys!


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Blah?? :) oh, I see.. an orange vodka attack! LOL ~ maybe try vanilla next time, with some sparkling water... ;p

From the bottom up, eh? good one, blaise! I guess we all have those moments to get over...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi,Invictus! :) How are you? I like vanilla, gotta try that one surely ;p Dreaming to have a toast with my fave poet :) Thank you

Yep, did it reversed LOL I was in the mood to play words and turning around things..But no matter how I reverse things, nothing could change the real feelings...

"I can't believe in time I could forget everything about you"


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Karen Russell 6 years ago

WONDERFUL! THANKS FOR SHARING...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks a lot KR :)


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aware 6 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

eye like it .


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Haha.. hmmm, maybe someday a toast.. one never know how the cards will fall. ;p I am doing well. working on launching a business, this next week. So I am very excited about that!

Oh, I see.. nice to have a play with words, eh? :) I think my words are ready for some fun too! LOLzzz ;0


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Aware - eye thank you ;p

@Invictus - Yup, dont forget the vanilla ;) Wow, perfect for your business launching! I'll have cheers ahead ;p

Yup, play and mess up sometimes are quite fun LOL :)


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Love can be frustrating and it can be thrilling too. There is always that thing of telling yourself that you are over someone after a relationship has ended. But if I find myself saying things like this, then something in me still feels its not quite ended or out of my system yet. People can have such an effect on us, Blaise. I liked this hub. We are only human. Keep your chin up and believe in yourself. *wow, did I just write that?* :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hey moi friend :) I like your heart...it is beautiful. I wrote it backwards. "I can't believe in time I could forget everything about you" that's the real thing..the last phrase if you read it from bottom til up ;p

I just played with words...perhaps the result of not getting over someone LOL

I'm happy to see you Cath :) XO


cosette 6 years ago

hah ha that was great! me like...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Cosette! Thank you :) Lookin forward to read more of you.. I like your thought for the day BTW and Quincy :)


seasoning 6 years ago

interesting up or down


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

:) thanks Sea


Just A Voice 6 years ago

Very clever :)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

very clever. I like it both ways, forward and backwards. When you put it backwards its a little more sad


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

I like the title a lot =) I felt like I was twisted and turned with the whole emotional blast, very powerful both ways!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

one of those moments eh :) thanks Max!

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