Blue Sky And Blue Feelings

The sky and its colors

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BLUE


I'm shivering under the leaves

So cold around me

Waiting for the sun to shine

Softly the wind starts blowing

The leaves are moving

I open my blue eyes

Just to see a glimpse of the grey sky

Now is not the right time

The wind whispers to me

Go back to sleep now

And I will wake you up again

When the sky has turned blue

Millions of seconds later

A dream wakes me up

As I open my eyes

The sky is pink

Did I sleep too long this time?

Did I miss to see the blue sky?

I knew then

That the wind had let me down

I knew then

That I would never trust anyone again

As the sky turned black

I closed my blue eyes

And all I could feel was blue

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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Oh how I loved this gem;a truly beautiful poem and I have to vote up.

Take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thanks Eiddwen! I really appreciate your kind words. :)


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I don't know how you do what you do but you do it so well...lots of do's in that sentence. Great job and absolutely lovely.


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

This poem made me think of the Leann Rimes song Blue ... her song is beautiful and so is your poem! Simply beautiful!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

Really....REALLY nice poem. I like it so much, it surprises me, because I'm just recently getting into to appreciating poetry. Poems like yours help me move right along. Thank you!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi billybuc, I just did it. :) Thanks!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Blue is a beautiful song, Sunshine. I don't mind being compared with Leann Rimes. :) Have a nice weekend!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi fpherj48, I'm glad you liked it and it feels good to know that I can help you appreciate poems. Thank you so much!


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zzron 4 years ago from Houston, TX.

Very beautiful imaginative and creative.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you, zzron. :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Interplay of colors in the poem is brilliant.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Vinaya, I like writing about colors, and to combine them with feelings makes it emotional. I think.


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Oscarlites 4 years ago from Alabama

awe.. some very enlightening words.. I especially liked the term, " millions of minutes"


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Oscarlite, sometimes I happen to find the right words. :) I really appreciate your comment, thank you!


iamaudraleigh 4 years ago

You express your soul so brilliantly through your poem. It made me want to shed tears for you. Your audience is in love with your poetry. Voted up and shared!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I found this in one of my groups on Facebook. Awesome poem, and so beautiful... You are a great writer.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

iamaudraleigh, thank you so much for the comment. It makes me smile. Thank you for sharing this poem.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you Astra. The hubbers I've met on Facebook are very supportive.


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

This is a very beautiful and inspiring poem and I thank you for sharing it with us!


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Made 4 years ago from Finland Author

Hi jonmcclusk, thank you for reading. :)

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