Blueprints (tanka)

Where do we wander

When sleep kisses us goodnight

And soft gates appear

Into the lands of our dreams

Or blueprints of tomorrow

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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Oh, now this is oh so beautiful!!! Love it very much!

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

A glimpse of the next life? So much in so few words...well done!

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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Beautiful poem Martin!

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travmaj 4 years ago from australia

I agree - I love your tanka - one beautiful poem.

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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

Succinct and beautiful - blueprints for life's plans.

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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

To the land of dreams where everything is possible..... Beautifully done.

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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Wonderful. I love the thought.

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cat on a soapbox 4 years ago from Los Angeles

Very nice!

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lilyfly 4 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

THIS IS SEMINAL! There you are sweetie! Look at you! All growed up! I love this ephemeral, dreaming quality to the piece! Excellent! Love yaz, lily

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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

Blueprints of tomorrow, I like that. Another awesome poem.

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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

So much said in such short and sweet way. Many thanks for this one. Shares and votes ++++++

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. This was so wonderful.

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Another one of your masterpieces! Loved it...

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Quoteslover 4 years ago

I'ts simply beautiful poem

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ImKarn23 4 years ago've got my wondering now..

something different today, M!

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