The Trouble with Magic. A Bewitching Mystery series review.

The Trouble with Magic, by Madelyn Alt

Maggie turns her back to the "camera" on each cover. Nice, matching art by Monika Roe for each book in the series. Cover design by Judith Morello, interior text design by Stacy Irwin.
Maggie turns her back to the "camera" on each cover. Nice, matching art by Monika Roe for each book in the series. Cover design by Judith Morello, interior text design by Stacy Irwin. | Source

Not Quite Cozy.

I do not consider this book cozy enough, so I won't be reading or reviewing any of the others in this series.

There is a firearm involved, for thing.

Play Misty Gray for Me

I don't know what it was that made me abandon my usual path to work on that particular October Tuesday. The morning had dawned misty and gray --- my favorite kind --- and it made me groan all the more about heading into the grim Collections job I had desperately come to dread.

I was hooked on those first two sentences.

October is my favorite month. Tuesday is my favorite day of the week, and I really love misty and gray --- especially on a Tuesday in October.

The Tao of Felicity

Maggie goes out for a ride --- instead of going to work --- in her 1972 VW Bug --- named "Christine" --- to do a little sight-seeing.

A shadow had fallen over my hometown; I hardly recognized it anymore. They say that change is good . . . In the case of Stony Mill, that meant opening our arms to a flood of big-city expatriates who saw my quiet town as a way of building their expensive homes free of the burden of city-sized taxes. . . . Why the interlopers all seemed to feel this town owed them for the honor of their presence was beyond me.

Agreed --- I also live in a town like that.

It's refreshing to see these critical comments --- instead of the usual boosterism about how we have to "grow". (Grow what? I want to ask.)

During her tour of the antiques area of Stony Mill --- one of the few good effects of gentrification --- Maggie accidentally falls into a store called "Enchantments" while trying to duck into the doorway to get out of the rain.

Felicity Dow --- the owner of Enchantments --- asks Maggie to work at the store. Maggie accepts, right then and there. She felt the Toad would be firing her anyway, for not calling in that day.

Felicity is a charming, gracious British lady who claims to be a practicing witch.

The Trouble with Magic, by Madelyn Alt

Maggie knows her new boss, Felicity, practices the Craft of Wicca ---  Witchcraft. When Felicity goes to her sister's house in answer to a call for help, Isabella's body is lying at the foot of the stairs.
Maggie knows her new boss, Felicity, practices the Craft of Wicca --- Witchcraft. When Felicity goes to her sister's house in answer to a call for help, Isabella's body is lying at the foot of the stairs.

Sick of Bill Collecting

Maggie dislikes her job at the collections agency.

It's probably just as well, because the above - cited abandonment of her usual path was the last straw for her boss, The Toad --- who calls female employees "the girls" --- when she showed up at work that morning ("finally" according to The Toad), citing "car problems" as the reason.

Well, more like --- she got into her car and drove away, not knowing when she would report to work. That's a "car problem", right?

A Sad Beginning

Sadly, on Maggie's first day of work at Enchantments, Felicity receives an urgent phone call which we later learn is from her sister, Isabella. Felicity leaves Maggie in charge of the shop while she drives to Isabella's home to see what the mysterious phone call had been about.

When Felicity gets to her sister's home, she finds Isabella's body at the bottom of the stairs. Apparently Isabella has been murdered.

Felicity is the prime suspect.

Sibling Rivalry

Felicity found her sister's body, for one thing. That tends to arouse suspicion.

But, for another, Felicity ("Liss") and Isabella had not been on good terms with each other --- ever since Liss' late husband had an affair with Isabella.

Reserving Judgment on this Series

I think this series might not be right for me, but I'm not sure yet.

I really liked Maggie in the beginning of the book, as I say above. But, as the book goes on, several things started bothering me. Maggie became more difficult for me to like. She becomes a little whiny and dependent as the book goes on. It became boring and dull.

And, there's a male character who apparently is supposed to be attractive and mysterious, but who is an obvious cliché with no personality.

The story takes place in a small midwestern town, where most know each other. In that case, however --- how is it that Maggie has never heard of Felicity or Enchantments before the day she fell in through that door.

Friend and Neighbor

Maggie lives in the same building as an old friend from high school.

The two of them love to watch reruns of Magnum P.I.

Worst of All . . .

But, maybe what bothered me the most was the solution to the mystery.

It's really creepy!!

I figured the apparent murderer was a red herring, and the author would provide a less repugnant solution when the time came, but I was disappointed!

It really is that creepy.

Some readers might not be as upset by the creepy solution as I was. Nevertheless . . .

A Felicitous Farewell

I never stopped liking Felicity. She always stayed dignified, honorable and reserved.

She eventually was cleared of suspicion, and the cop who Maggie thought was questioning her because of prejudice against Wicca --- it turns out he always knew she wasn't the murderer anyway.

He was just trying to protect Felicity from the real killer --- who he knew would be stalking her.

Nevertheless, Maggie had already stopped dating that cop before that anyway. I feel the author is setting us up for some sort of romantic involvement with that "mysterious" guy.

I guess the sequel will tell more about the supposedly attractive, mysterious guy, and get Maggie involved with him, even though he's a total bore.

On the other hand, Maggie is pretty boring herself.

Not always, though.

At the beginning of the book, Maggie started out with wit, independence and sarcastic critiques.

Her personality sort of broke down as the book went on.

I'm not sure how or why.

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Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

Hi, I think that's the trouble with books that go on too long in the series, they seem to lose something, and I always end up leaving the last two or three books too, glad you hear from you by the way! lol!


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Huntgoddess 3 years ago from Midwest U.S.A. Author

Hey, thanks for reading my Hub, Nell, and commenting.

Always so glad to hear from you, as well.


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Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

Have a great evening, and yes its 2am over here! lol! off to hit the sack, night, nell


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Au fait 23 months ago from North Texas

I used to read fiction once upon a time, but now I just can't seem to get interested in it and keep my mind on it long enough to finish the book. I think maybe I read so much before that it's hard to find something new and different. I prefer how-to books and do-it-yourself books, etc. these days.

An interesting review. Voted up!


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Huntgoddess 23 months ago from Midwest U.S.A. Author

Well, there is certainly nothing wrong with those!

Right now, I'm "reading" a knitting pattern for toys I hope to make for my grandbabies. That is a type of DIY, maybe? lol

I had hoped to finish for Christmas, but I think toys are fun at any time of the year.

I know what you mean about fiction. It can be quite irksome.

Speaking of irksome ------ this on-screen keyboard is driving me nuts!! I'd write more about this interesting topic otherwise.

Thanks for stopping by, and for the vote. :-)


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Au fait 21 months ago from North Texas

Yes, learning to make something is DIY. I love craft books, but also books that are about current or recent events, etc. Biographies and auto biographies and the like. Sometimes books about historical events. I know people can learn a lot by reading fiction, too, but I just can't seem to concentrate on it very well anymore.

When I did read fiction, this book you've reviewed would have appealed. I liked adventure and mystery. I loved the Harry Potter series. I still think they are fantastic for any age person. Rowling was so good at developing characters and plots within plots.


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Huntgoddess 21 months ago from Midwest U.S.A. Author

Thanks for the nice compliment, Au fait.

By all means --- different reading material appeals to me at different times, for different reasons I guess.


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Au fait 15 months ago from North Texas

Your excellent review makes these books seem very intriguing. I always liked mysteries and if there were just a few more hours in the day, who knows? I might persuade myself to try fiction again. Fortunately not everyone is like me, and I think if they get a chance to read your wonderful reviews they will be reading these books!


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Huntgoddess 15 months ago from Midwest U.S.A. Author

Well, that is very nice of you to say, dear.

I'm quite flattered that you would even consider "converting" due to my little Hubs.

I really don't read fiction myself, except for these cozies, and of course Dickens, et al. Also, I used to be quite a huge fan of Agatha Christie, and of A.C. Doyle.

I travel via public transportation a lot, and I always have one of these in my purse.

They also provide me with a little respite from my real problems. They distract me long enough to made me feel better.

Take care. See you soon, I hope.

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