Born of a whisper - Romantic poem

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Born of a whisper - poem of love


It started as a whisper,
a caress of the soul,
words of a lover,
Making me whole!

Tenderness flowed,
through the hands of time,
and souls glowed,
in warmth so fine!

A breath, a whiff,
a gentle breeze,
a probing kiss,
a sensual tease!

Buds of sweat,
glistening skin,
blushing rosettes,
Love’s journey begins!

In the dark of night,
rustling love,
passion’s flight,
concluding in delighted sighs!

Shadows and light,
from silvery stars above,
your lips and mine,
in a clasp of love!

Born of a whisper,
enshrined in the soul,
quenched in moments tender,
from eternity stole!

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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I love your poetry! So beautiful...so full of life and love and the full spectrum of feeling. You are a talent to be savored and I greatly appreciate you.


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endless sea 4 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

Just awesome!! loved it :) voted up and beautiful... lovely


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

It feels so good to read your poem at this time of the night.

23:27, Kathmandu.


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sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

Beautiful expression of loves passion and contentment.

Looking forward to reading more of your hubs. Voted up and beautiful.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Lips in a clasp of love, beautiful and unique..Loved it. Thank you.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Billybuc, you are such an encouragement. Your words are always so comforting and peaceful.Thank you. Have a blessed day!Peace!


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Endless sea, Thanks for the awesome comment. I am so glad to have you here on my pages. Have a blessed day!Peace!


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Vinaya, Thank you for that comment. My words did put in a great mood I guess. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a blessed day!Peace!


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Sweethearts, Wow what a name! Thank you for honoring me with your visit and comment. Have a blessed day!Peace!


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

AE, Hmmm ... I had that naughty smile on my face while writing this... Some memories get better with time I guess. Thanks for those lovely words. Have a blessed day! Peace and love!


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endless sea 4 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

sure I am happy to be on your pages as well .. GOD bless you :)


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Awesome poetry. Voted it up and beautiful.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Absolutely awsome!

Voted up/awsome, thank you.

Best wishes Lesley


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Beautifully written!


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

"Born of a whisper,

enshrined in the soul,

quenched in moments tender,

from eternity stole!"

Great poetry, very tender, passionate, sweet as love! :)


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

shim you're moving up fast as one of my favs..bless you


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poet83 4 years ago from Windsor, Va.

This poem really can make a reader melt! Very beautiful images here and I like the exclamation points at the end of each stanza. They add an extra element of emotion to this already powerful piece. Voted up and beautiful!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

As always, beautiful,alluring, sensual. Voted up


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

Wow...beautiful composition shalom.

Bless you, my friend


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Endless sea, thank you once again and have a blessed day.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

BlossomSB, Thank you. I appreciate your visits and comments. Have a blessed day.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Lesley, Thank you. Great to see you here again. Have a blessed day. Peace.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Audrey, Thank you. Have a blessed day. Peace.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Rahul, Thanks for the tender passionate sweet comment. Loved it. Have a blessed day. Peace.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Frank, you are one of my faves without doubt! The reacts your poetry elicit is amazing.. Have a blessed day. Peace.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Poet83, Thanks or those kind words sir. I appreciate them very much. Have a blessed day. Peace.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

tobusiness, your comment is truly motivating.Thank you. Have a blessed day. Peace.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Ruchira, Thanks for those kind words, my friend. May your day be blessed!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

how romantic! voted up!


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Unknown spy, Thanks for the lovely comment and follow. I appreciate that. Have a great day.


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LeaghJanell 4 years ago from Fairfield, Iowa

Sensual innocence, fertile ground for true loving.


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful! I certainly hope the sensation lasts for you. I've not had the pleasure as of yet...... (of it lasting). Voted up and beautiful.

I love poetry. That is most of what I write. I took good advice from billybuc and will now follow you. You're a smooth operator and I love your pen name!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

heart rending while sending sparks to my heart...convulsing in a cosmic awe...as always an inspiring and awesome poem Shim...Peace!


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

LeaghJanell, That is a lovely compliment. Thank you so much for the visit and your kind words. I apologize for the delay in acknowledging this.. Have a blessed day.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Brave warrior, Thank you for following me... Billybuc is a kind soul .. Your kind words have put a happy smile on my face..

I love the dawn.. I so love these beautiful golden dawns.. from where I took my name.. Thanks, the feeling has lasted for many years now.. and I hope it would forever.. Wishing you much love.. Have a blessed day.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Raci, Thanks for those intense words.. mean a lot to me.. I will be there to read what you have written. Have a blessed day.


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Kebennett1 4 years ago from San Bernardino County, California

Flowed so beautifully and the words were awesome! I loved it! Voted Up and awesome!


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

Kebennett1, Thank you. It is such a pleasure to see you here on my pages. Have a blessed day.


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rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

Awesome poem :) very romantic :) God bless you!


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago Author

rdsparrowriter, Thanks for that awesome comment! Have a blessed day.

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