Breaking Up Is Hard To Do But (limerick)

He knew that the girl couldn’t stay

Regardless of tears shed that day

And though pain was rife

It cut like a knife

But what was his wife gonna say

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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

interesting :)


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DanaTeresa 4 years ago from Ohio

very nicely put! ;)


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Love the zinger at the end!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Quite the dilemma for sure!


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Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

Wow, I was getting into it, nice surprise! lol


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Cheating is hard to do!


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter,

Good thought provoking question! :)


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

Cheating starts in the mind.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Nice twist =) You evil LOL


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takerecess 4 years ago from USA

"where's my shotgun?"


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

what is left to say,

she too will ran away!

than with tears he yern,

oh, my wife betray!

............................Classic one!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

As you know, the wife rules!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

lol Good one.

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