Breathe You

still..I breathe you
still..I breathe you

how much would I crave

to touch you

only heaven knows

just your skin brushin mine

I would know I’m alive

I would catch my death


I wish I was special

I wish you breathe me too

but I can’t tell

I just can’t tell

I inhale and exhale you


how much would I dream

about you and me

but only the stars could glitter

images

just images on my mind

forever you’d be a ghost

haunting me


so we kissed

we missed

cuddled and curled up

so we laughed

we cried

made and broke up


I wish I was special

I wish you breathe me too


how far would I run

to chase you

to finally be in your arms

when I’m close

so close

me, the hell escaping


and I can’t tell

I just can’t tell

I inhale and exhale you


how long would I wait

to stare at your face

stunning

when you smile

couldn’t even look you

in the eye


I wish I was special

I wish you breathe me too

but I can’t tell

I just can’t tell

I inhale and exhale you



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In a Blur

4 p.m.

Whoever You are

The Killer

Y o u

Jealous

Girl in the Rain


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Awww, the beautiful longings and pangs for love! Ahem, you ARE special my friend and if it is not seen and acknowledged.. I say, WALK the other way...don't waiste another breath on someone who doesn't appreciate you! ;)

I wish you so much love you that your life is a love puddle for two!! LOL

Beautiful poem as always..


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Hey- I'm right here - I'll slow down! Here I am! Alas- I will not do. Even though I do, breathe you. Thank you Blaise!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

yea pangs of love.Never knew I was special coz I never asked..I'm a dumb scared lover..always screw things up..to make things worse, I suffocate wherever..

Thanks for the wishes..really need a crazy love puddle for two LOL

Your comments always make me smile coz it came from a star :) THANKS Invictus!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

geez, I so wanna cry right now..thanks Mik!


seasoning 6 years ago

just go ahead and cry here is a tissue


poetlorraine 6 years ago

inhale and exhale, keep breathing, i breathe to love you .... where did i read that once.


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Aw, blaise! Ya need a big warm hug, you poor thing! This was so full of longing and so emotional. My word, you blow me away with such beautiful honesty. You are very rare in this world! I always love reading your poems. You have the power to move people. That is a special gift. *Hugs you*


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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Evocotive!


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

OH ! blaise, your words put the pain so beautifully. Anyone who can write like that IS special.

An all-consu ming love that you live and breathe can be very, very difficult.

I hope you feel lifted up soon. God Bless x


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I am feeling so affected by this, by you. Where did you ever learn to write like this. You are so gifted. I agree with Dim, you are special. You have talent. Make very good use of it, blaise. Much of what you say there resonates with me in just oh so many ways. You see what I see. You are so human, and you truly feel things.

God i love the hubs and this.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Ow thank you Sea :)

LOL hmm, lemme guess Invictus? I’d like to read that ;) thanks Poet!

Thanks for the hug Cheeky. I’m so glad to have met you and Cathy here ;) I’m rooting for you two! And thanks again for the praises and links to my blog :)

Evocative..wow deep! Thanks Mentalist acer :)

Everyone is special and everyone is rare..but being special to your someone special is crazy beautiful! Always glad to see you Dim :) XD

Hello there Cathy! Thank you for the beautiful comments..glad it resonates some things to you. Hey, I know who you breathe ;p


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

Another beautiful piece of writing!!!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you CM :)


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

So deeply felt, very well done...


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Hey blaise,

just stopping to share this vid with you. Another hubber mentioned some lines from it which I thought were great regarding what compels us to write sometimes and in listening to it I thought of this poem and that you may like this.. :) enjoy.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPz3YaIJkjQ


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Moulik

thank you for always reading and commenting ;)

@Invictus

2 AM and she calls me 'cause I'm still awake,

Can you help me unravel my latest mistake,

I don't love him, winter just wasn't my season.....

I dunno what to say..it resonates a lot hell and heaven outta me LOL That song is beautiful..so beautiful! Im gonna listen later for the artist's other songs coz really fell in love..

hmm, can I know who's the hubber? I gotta read his hubs ;)

that's so sweet Invictus! you get a hug for that :) Thank you.


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

yeah, song can speek to many, I'm sure.. and I had heard it before, just not in a while.. the lines a bit later, were what hit me. The hubber is Azur Moon Wolf. :) some great poetry too! glad you liked it! ;)

'It's 2 Am and I'm still awake, writing a song

If I get it all down on paper, it's no longer

Inside of me, threatening the life it belongs to'...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

"And I feel like I'm naked in front of the crowd

Cause these words are my diary, screaming out loud...."

hmm, I wonder where I met you Invictus.. :) maybe centuries ago, the connection still lingers eh ;p


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TrixieGator 6 years ago

~beautiful longing~ to be loved like you love..~wonderfully written emotion


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

ow thank you Trixie :)


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I like that. Yes, you know who I breathe. A very beautiful person indeed...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

hmmm I wonder if she'll stop by here again, Cath..That comment of yours would put a smile on her face ;)


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christalluna1124 6 years ago from Dallas Texas

Beautiful piece of work. Blaise you have the heart of a romantic much like my own...ahhh the pain of suffering in the name of love.

Take care my friend,

Chris


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Ow, thank you Chris! Ah romantic, I'm not..I just say what I feel ;) This is my favorite from all of my poems I must say. It has so much meanings..so much that what is written conceals so much about what is hidden..It's not pain nor suffering per se, it's more than that.

TC =)


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

This Is Absolutely Beautiful.

"I wish I was special

I wish you breathe me too

but I can’t tell

I just can’t tell

I inhale and exhale you"

This Line Is Chest Punching.

The Entire Poem Is Very Good.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

I should admit it's my fave from my creations :) Chest punching so true. Still punches mine til now...

Thank you AP. Your comments mean a lot


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Such an emotional poem, deep, meaningful piece, Fehl, I feel such an array of feelings, it's touching, I mean, those thoughts are really palpable. Amazing!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Palpable? Oh wow! Thank you for reading my old piece Max. you are awesome and you know that already :)


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love the mood of this poem... I read it before - I'm sure I did. It's disconsolate and moving, trying to render sense from a relationship... sifting thoughts and sifting emotions just beyond the perimeter of the gentle ego within... we all want to be special. we want others to make us feel special... we want to be special for them as well...

I love your poems, Fehl. :)


Vincent Moore 2 years ago

This poem you breathed new life into by resurrecting it once more. It's as beautiful now as it was when it was penned 3 years go, it takes my breath away. Thank you for reposting it dear poet. Hugs


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Cathy. :) Thank you so much for reading this again and for sharing it on Twitter. Oh wow this old hub of mine is not even featured..I really need to start updating dead hubs I think. hehehe Mwaaaaaaaaaaah!

We are all special. But sometimes we forget we are. Then we meet that one person who will make us feel more than special. Then everything is just beautiful...like it's meant to be. Like everyday is more than special and more than beautiful to be thankful for.

I met that person.

And she loves Weetabix and muffins at breakfast. hehehe I'm teasing you honey. She is you baby. Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! I love you. XOXO

Hi Vincent! Wow two of the best poets in Hubpages visited my old hub today. I'm so happy. I can't wait to read your writings on FlashStar. You inspire so many people. Thank you and I'm so happy my words here take your breath away. *hugs*


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hehehe. I am smiling and reading this and smiling again. I know this person that you met and made you feel special and new. I know that feeling so much. Love makes life new, honey. Hehehe.

Just going to have rice with "ulam" of chicken from last night, and jamine rice ... it's my Friday breakfast. I am loving my early morning coffee and reading your loving words... you really melt me, Fehl.

I love you so much, my beautiful woman. Oh last night I had ten more come on board. Geez... the magazine is getting harder to manage with so many wanting to be in it. If this was a company I'd have to start hiring. LOL. :P

And yes, Vincent will be also be in FlashStar. Thank you Vincent. You are so kind to do this. And thank you, Fehl.

Teena says a sleepy hi from here. Miss Curly is off work today. I am so jealous. :P

Mwaaaaaaaaah. XOXOXOXO


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow :) *Smiling here now too* She is you, my Cathy. My love forever and more. Mwaaaaaaaaaah!

Wow you know "ulam" now baby. You can live here already you know so many Tagalog. I just finished my lunch and it's so masarap like you baby. hehehe LOL

I'm so happy for your magazine. You can make it big coz you are so smart and you're happy with what you're doing. You better start hiring honey. Oh by the way I know where Miss Editor-in-Chief's room is. ;)

Hello to my sister Teena. Happy Friday Nerujens! And to Cassy and Gran too ;p

XOXOXOXOXO


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manatita44 2 years ago from london

Extremely exquisite!


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much Manatita :)

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