Breeze Carry My Sorrows Away

This photo was taken by me in Zion, IL
This photo was taken by me in Zion, IL

Breeze carry my sorrows away.

Take me away from my emotional captivity causing a permanent impression in my mind.

Bring me the tranquility and when I receive it, let me know the meaning.

My skin feels the sensation of hope but not enough to dry my tears.

Looking yonder in search of brighter days.

My desires escapes me.

I need to escape.

It's not fair for them to go away and leave me behind.

Dark in the daylight but yet you are the speed of light.

I beg of you breeze as you taunt and tease my freedom, my soul..

Carry my sorrows away.

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Ausseye 4 years ago

Hi Sassy: Good to sense your vitality and strength for the future. Loved the poem.


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sassyk73 4 years ago from Milwaukee, WI Author

Ausseye, thank you for reading my poem. I am well and I now have a fresh sense of life. I am taking the reins of my future and riding it down the road of endless possibilities.


Ausseye 4 years ago

Hi Sassy: Hope the breeze bring a real fresh sense of life into you soul

Your poem made me sad and worry about you

Hope a fresh, fruitful and zesty future awaits you

May beauty dominate your existence and

Lush humanity rule your world.


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sassyk73 4 years ago from Milwaukee, WI Author

Thank you CelticWillow67


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CelticWillow67 4 years ago from Central New Jersey

Beautifully written! Voted up and beautiful!

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