Brightest-Nights

Rain drenched darkness fills their hearts

With others razors In their hands.

They're In there now writing lasting letters.

With pictures of old times In far sight.

Lightning covered darkness In there eyes

With others razors In their veins and

Their letters are In their final place and everything Is

Neatly tucked away ..

Memories begin flashing through

Their pain induced minds suffering…

They're now pacing through their selfishly escaping time..

They lay down methodically and then just simply die…

With others razors on their floors..

They're now laying In those pools..

Wind enhanced darkness fills their sky’s

And In that moment their demons begin to cry

While their angels only let out their simplest sighs..

The dirtiest skeletal hands now waving at them ..

The flames O ! The flames they feel!!!

The Screams O ! those screams how they hear!!!

The pain now O ! No O How now It Is eternally theirs!

Brightest Nights-

Comments 9 comments

Noble Mongoose profile image

Noble Mongoose 6 years ago

I like the imagery and the power behind the concept.

I can't figure out whether the mix up of "their, they're, and there" is on purpose or accident. lol


Sapphire Fisher 6 years ago

Loved it very good!


blackreign2012 profile image

blackreign2012 6 years ago

Bravo!! ~hugs~


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

The flames O ! The flames they feel!!!

The Screams O ! those screams how they hear!!!

The pain now O ! No O How now It Is eternally theirs!

Brightest Nights-

and They're In there now writing lasting letters.

grabbed me and won't let go

the impact of truth

Truth in emotions/feelings specifically if we allow ourselves

to be open and see the shadow of it's meaning

Then we are blessed and if want can learn from

all the levels of our pain

that ultimately drive us

that ultimately makes us larger than life

scattered remains consist of silence and inner peace

David, this is just one example of what you offer

Fly D Fly

btw just a side note, don't forget your airmiles card


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

oh and btw Can you do that thing you do whenever you do, I sure do.

This piece kicks ass, hows that for etiquette

xo


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

just checking in seeing if your okay :_)


poetlorraine 6 years ago

hi nice one, well done...


Awful Poet profile image

Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Am And Will Kimberly!

And poetlarraine Than You

For Stoping By Stay Awhile

Get Comfy Its Going To Be

A Long One


truster profile image

truster 6 years ago from A Bed of Roses

Interesting!Very revealing !

    Sign in or sign up and post using a HubPages Network account.

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    No HTML is allowed in comments, but URLs will be hyperlinked. Comments are not for promoting your articles or other sites.


    Click to Rate This Article
    working