Bring Back The Dance

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Intimately dancing, you and I on the floor

Remember how it felt back then, before

Bring back the dance of seduction I roar

Oh how I long to feel that again

Passion erupting from deep down within

Music playing, as our bodies were swaying

Whispering tantalizing desires to each other

Excitement building while we danced in the night

Enthralled by each others sexual appetites

Remember that feeling of having to have

To not achieve it would truly drive us mad

Lustfully yearning for that feeling of desire

Arousal building, getting higher and higher

Anticipating the ecstasy, we both so enjoyed

Oh how I long to feel that again




© 2011 Susan Zutautas

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Just Ask Susan 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thanks so much Kim!


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

Greetings!

So sensual. Much enjoyed.

Best Always,

Kim


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Sam, Thank you :)


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TycoonSam 4 years ago from Washington, MI

WOW...That was Hot!

Thanks for getting my blood flowing this morning!


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Tammy

deepak

Audrey

Thank you all, I appreciate all of your comments.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Lovely piece!! I love dancing and it is just such a romantic thing to do--Great internal rhythm to this!!!


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deepak2u 4 years ago from Andhra Pradesh,INDIA

lovely article ! Keep posting Good articles Friends


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

I love this! Talk about rhythm and cadence.. LOL


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

PDX, Thank you. Dirty Dancing is one of the movies I can watch over and over and never tire of it.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

nice work, Susan. very spicy. great video too!


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Rusticliving & Sharon, Thank you both so much.


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Sharyn's Slant 4 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

This is beautiful Susan. I am so glad that Lisa found this and brought it to light. I could understand longing to feel the intimacy of a close dance . . .


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Rusticliving 4 years ago from California

What a beautiful intreptation of the Dance. Dancing is such a wonderful way to express yourself. Fabulous Job Susan!

Voted up and Shared!


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thanks Dale.

Ken, Thank you, that is quite a compliment coming from one of my favorite poets :)


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

I always loved dancing and intimately close. This was a wonderful sensual hub and could have very easily been added to the ones many recently put in, however I know you can't bump a hub, you think we should be able to. There are so many great hubs buried that we've written and know one really is reading them now. I wish there was a way to bump a hub forward. Great write, loved it Susan. hugs


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hillrider 5 years ago from Mid-west United States

Voted ya up Susan. Nice sentiments to the poem, wish I didn't have two left feet and a limp ... LOL


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Jane thanks for stopping by.


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Jane Bovary 5 years ago from The Fatal Shore

There's a lot to be said for The Dance....and you've just said it!

Thanks


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thanks so much Chatkath.


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Chatkath 5 years ago from California

Always loved to dance but I never found my patrick swayze, seems like my guys are never dancers.....

Great Hub Susan, thanks for sharing!


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thanks so much Sue. Speaking of dishes...I better get mine done.


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sueroy333 5 years ago from Indiana

My sentiments exactly.. only said so much better!

Up and awesome!!!

(I am now wistfully daydreaming-probably for the rest of the day. This will be my excuse as to why the dishes are not done...)


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

One of the things that I simply cannot do well, and it drives my wife (the dancer) up the wall.

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