But Here We Are Now

But Here We Are Now

A dusty red corpse sees
Titan and Selene
Orphaned or not?

A septuplet orchestra
Plays. It gives a rainbow of
questions.

A ricochet of
Vigor and fortune
To solo green goo.

The fealty and feeling
Of each is never
Too similar, but
Here we are now.

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Originally written May 14, 2008. This poem ended up being too cryptic for what I had intended, but I decided I liked it anyway. It was merely meant to be a brief offering of how life came to be on earth, looking at the Greek, then Christian then Big Bang stories of origin; and without taking a stance on any of them.


Looking back, I do like this poem despite going for a surreal feel and having it come off more or less as just strange and fun (to me), I feel it's too passive. That likely makes it a weak poem. I think if I were to ever revisit this subject, I would present it as more of a single viewpoint, and not just an observation.

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