But On The Other Hand

On the one hand
I am complete
But on the other
I know I'm not

A forest is unaware of its beauty
Yet it never stops growing

On the one hand
I am a mentor
But on the other
I'm never really sure

A teacher may never see the fruit
Yet he continues to plant

On the one hand
I want love
But on the other
I don't

The right one is almost not even there
But you are never alone

On the one hand
I am a good father
But on the other
I am not

They know that I love them
But I have my own life

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iva dragostinova 4 years ago from Brighton, UK

I enjoyed reading this. I loved the opposition followed by metaphor/explanation. I was left wanting that for the last stanza too though. Good piece. Up and interesting.


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The Suburban Poet 4 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Oops... I left the last stanza off! I copied it from Word and left it off. Duh....Thank you for pointing that out... I'll fix it.


iva dragostinova profile image

iva dragostinova 4 years ago from Brighton, UK

Yey! :) Look forward to it :)


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

sometimes I am not a good mother and sometimes I am.. I know how you feel. I feel like I could do better. so we just keep on trying and not stopping.

Love your hub.

Debbie


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

A true gem and thnaks for sharing.

Take care my friend and have a great day.

Eddy.


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The Suburban Poet 3 years ago from Austin, Texas Author

Thank you iva, Debora and Eiddwen... so long to respond. I'm sorry...

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