By Destiny - a short poem

Sun and Moon collide,

Leaving a crack in the sky

The battle of all still reins up high

In excess we find our soul

In hell forever wanting more

The love of hate takes control

Leaving the soldier to ask

"What is all of this for?"

Compelled to leave He asks himself

"Is there even a better place?"

One look back and he makes the choice

To fight the hate, and have a voice

He trails on, determine to change the world

When the enemies send poison hurled

Karma delivers a twisted fate

How could he be the one they hate?

It is too bad that

He had learned human nature

All too late


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KD 3 years ago

This is the guy whose poem you reviewed on Yahoo Answers. Figured I'd return the favor. Great poem, it hits hard and there's a lot of meaning in those lines. Stuff like this keeps me motivated to write.


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Karmallama 3 years ago from St. Paul, minnesota Author

Thank you very much! I appreciate the visit. I do hope you keep writing.


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Bob Karaszi 3 years ago

I like this actually. Good message beautifully written. Nice one.


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Karmallama 3 years ago from St. Paul, minnesota Author

Thank you very much. I don't write poetry much, so I appreciate any comments

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