By The Mirror (poem)

Find me by the mirror waiting

One more dance

One more chance

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One more moment recreating

Yesterdays

Went their ways

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Still I’m hoping she will find me

Silent now and lost completely

Ever dreaming I’ll be set free

One more dance perhaps then maybe

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In the mirror now I’m searching

How could he

Let her flee

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Imagination started working

Shadows fall

After all

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Still reflecting tears I let by

Questions were asked I would deny

Now I’m alone wondering why

One more chance please life let me try

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By the mirror mind debating

Feeling low

Should I go

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Was it just my heart creating

dawning blur

Was it her

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Romeos Quill 2 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

If the protagonist in the verse is waiting for the woman to make up her mind, he could be in for a pretty long wait.

Sad, honest and reflective. Thank you.

All the Best,

R.Q.


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Anna Haven 2 years ago from Scotland

Really quite thought provoking and poignant. Deep and well written.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

It's so sad when we let love slip though our fingers. Beautiful song choice, Martin.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Oh, I think I totally misread this - I thought it was a poem about dying. Sorry. It's really very deeply romantic, hope he finds her.


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FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

and she may be waiting for him to come to her


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Yes, looking deep within oneself and always pondering what if ...

Up and more and sharing

Blessings, Faith Reaper


DJ Anderson 2 years ago

Sad, but beautiful. You let emotions rise to the top and linger with a touch of imagination and the taste of salty tears.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Deep and lovely, Martin.


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teaches12345 2 years ago

A very deep thought but it does speak of a love that burns in memory.


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aviannovice 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Very well said, Martin. You capture the essence of the past, and what could have been done in another way.

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