WHEN I CRIED OUT

When I cried out,I got light,

Lost all pain, and got white,

The burden of evil, on my sight,

Lost all brain, and got right.


When I cried out, I got light,

When I tear into all breakups,

Lost all dirt, and all makeup’s,

Tears drained sleeps into all wakeups,

Loosing fault past and got gradeups.


When I tear into all breakups,


When I failed into my cheers,

Lost all failures and all fears,

The level was last and left no gears,

Loosing all peers, I won dears.


When I failed into my cheers,

When I deceived, into my trust,

Lost all greed’s and all rust,

The believe and faith now got just,

Lost material kingdom with divine burst.


When I deceived, into my trust,


When I fooled, I got lesson,

Lost all loops and got vision,

The surmount glory and the sun,

Now claims to be mine, declaring me won.

When I fooled, I got lesson,

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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

This is beautiful poetry. full of thought and insight of self . very nice,I like it.

must read more.

Michael


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks cleaner...its all about positivity in thoughts. god never makes his world with cruelity. he drives us to next step unknown and much more raisedf for us.


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vector7 4 years ago

You're mysterious yet expressed...

Your words are like soft cool rain on a warm sunny day.

I believe you just pulled out my lost passion in poetry. I have been gone from it for so long..

Your poem is exhilerating. Sincerely..

-v7


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

v7..thanks for looking into it so deeply yeah i have a great passion in poetry and i am sure it will boost u further...just go on to my hubs they are not just made to earn or gather the space they are really helping


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Many people believe crying is a way to sublimate our pain and suffering.

I loved the depth and emotional content in your poem.


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks vinaya

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